goody tss Voted: Matt Gee / Execute
Posted on: 2013-04-02 03:16:46

fv, both need alot of work. Voted: Matt Gee / Execute
Posted on: 2013-04-02 13:06:14

This was close but not in a good way. Matt- You really have rhyming down pat, I like your flow and your references cuz they were on point but you didn't throw any punches. I counted maybe 1 or 2 jabs but that's it. Make sure that ALL your lines are directed at your opponent otherwise you sound like your cypherish. Ok Ex- in all honesty you disappointed me with this verse. First of all, your rhyme scheme had no consistency and didn't even rhyme at times. Second of all, either your concepts are really stretched and forced or they make no sense at all. You indicate you're using wordplay but I can't easily draw a connection between the word you're using and the concept. So either expo it out or work on wording and structuring. Do both anyway. I really don't want to vote like this but my winner actually threw punches, I see potential in the winner if he would work on structure and direction. Fairs in Voted: Matt Gee / Execute
Posted on: 2013-04-05 07:30:59