Dead Bundy ... Fucking mass murderer Sorry execute but he fucking killed it. Voted: Dead Bundy / Execute
Posted on: 2013-04-02 02:58:59

i meant to put an 8 on execute oops Voted: Dead Bundy / Execute
Posted on: 2013-04-02 02:59:25

Nothing spectacular here. Both lacked any substance in their lines, however one actually threw punches. Bundy, I liked your flow alot, rhyme scheme was sick and this would've played really well in audio however, you didn't throw anything relatable to punches until the last few lines. Make sure next time you actually throw punches and don't talk about yourself the whole time. Ex, you threw punches but in either I'm missin something or your lines made no sense whatsoever. I'm willing to bet on the latter. Quotes indicate that you're using wordplay but none of your concepts connected with each other in the way you meant. Your rhyme scheme was unique though. You had an a b a b,rhyme scheme. However, as far as readability that puts stops in your momentum and verse because I had to go back to find out what you were rhyming. Both hold potential, and could be dope if they were pointed in the right direction. Fair's in. For further expo's or tips pm me. Voted: Dead Bundy / Execute
Posted on: 2013-04-03 10:18:36

damn, i thought one was alil more polished than displayed....but after reading i have ma winner. yall stay goochy. Tha Hoodz Vote. Voted: Dead Bundy / Execute
Posted on: 2013-04-05 09:10:37