#wordplayEVERYWHERE Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-04-27 22:40:04

One was more original and creative. Both executed well, but one was fresher so they got it. The fair is in. Voted: John Dos / Phracture
Posted on: 2013-04-27 22:49:18

good battle here.. JOHN-first bars wasted a bit of space wit irrelavency, till you came to the 'wanna boxx' concept which was pretty funny. second bar i can see where you tryin to incorporate 'starwars' references in the setup.. but then as you get towards the 'ANAKIN DID, the punchline kinda fell off, what do you mean where anakin did? go to the dark side? die at the hands of his son? breathe heavy? its a bit too vague to cause real damage..imo.. even if your setup tried to associate that he couldnt 'handle the kid', possibly referencing vadar not being able to handle luke.. then it turns into a mr. rogers punchline.. whole relevancy in the setup is lost..shoulda stuck wit the starwars til the end.. maybe say 'when the smitty pop', you gon start 'breathin hard' the way ANAKIN DID when he became a SITH IN ARMOR... ' this way you still retain the scheme you were tryin to achieve, and remain cohesive thru the entire set... rest of the bars had some nice multi sets, but some played wordplay.. ex. pair a shoot.. and owen hart concepts.. other than that, your verse definately had a more live battle feel to it... DIZZ- first bar , a good but rather obscure concept, how old are u?lolnext bar, didnt get how the bank on your OG, had anything to do wit the setup? are you sayin he needs to bank on the fact that he's an OG? or he needs an OG from his crew to help him.. then you end wit 'i remain a profit', which comes right outta nowhere.. you first tell him to rely on his crew, then you end by sayin you 'make money'?' this whole set was really forced imo.. rest was a mixd bag, puns, and concepts wit in consistent cohesive setups, til the end bars.. which ended wit a decent personal nameflip... my winner here was based on consistency on all elements as a whole...both had flaws in punch strenght, one more so than the other... fairs in.. Voted: John Dos / Phracture
Posted on: 2013-04-29 02:22:28

Ight let's get to this .... John dos .... Bar1 ... To much inter rhyming in here for me throws the flow of big time and punch was weak 5/10 .... Bar2 .... Bunch of filler here no real punch for me still not catching ya flow 5/10 ... Bar3 ... Eeyores tail line was coo first solid punch from all your beginning took way to long to come with a decent punch and let's face it smashing someone's GF isn't exactly fresh in terms of concepts but liked ya spin on it 7/10 .... Bar4 .... Again feels like filler heart drop line wasn't feeling it for me ... 6/10 ... Bar5/6 .... You got it flowing multis nice and shift but then the finish was just meh ..... Nothing hard but a little insult need to be more creative 6/10 .... For me fam your verse is to much time spent chatting and not enough punches being thrown in to much filler between ya multis .... It was an ight read haven't seen any other battles from you .... Moving on ..... Dissizit .... Bar1 .... Pow straight in with a punch nice lil opener here 7/10 ... Bar2 ... Hmmm felt wordplay was slightly forced liked the concept pretty dope .... 7/10 ... Bar3 ... Nah wordplay aint working for persona the end dont sound like sauna it's per zone a pronunciation where sa sauna it's like sawn a if dat makes sense i commend the attempt but not working for me 5/10 ... Bar4 ... Swastika punch was coo liked the concept but i couldn't catch the multi might be an accent thing 6/10 .... Bar5... Yeh nice solid bar again .... 7/10 ... Bar6 .... Solid closing to the battle here for me last two bar where on point 7/10 ..... My winner is quite clear here had more punches in his verse and more intent just watch that wordplay some seemed kinda forced to me ..... FV VBF .:X:. Voted: John Dos / Phracture
Posted on: 2013-04-29 18:39:35

Dope battle here fellas. Both had a really smooth flow here and the multi game was on point. My winner I felt took this w/ fresher concepts which lead to harder hitting lines. The other had a couple of nice bars but it just wasn't hitting as hard as the opponents. Consistency and freshess is what took this battle. Fairs in low to low Voted: John Dos / Phracture
Posted on: 2013-04-29 19:07:20

I think my winners concept were a bit more fresh Voted: John Dos / Phracture
Posted on: 2013-04-30 02:17:39

fv Voted: John Dos / Phracture
Posted on: 2013-04-30 03:23:24

Fucking FV votes do my nut in give it an expo .... Voted: John Dos / Phracture
Posted on: 2013-04-30 13:26:50

very enjoyable rhyme scheme from both dudes. build-ups were evenly matched. the winner had a stronger wordplay setups, make punchlines a bit stronger. lows and highs here. Voted: John Dos / Phracture
Posted on: 2013-04-30 14:13:19

i will say both of yall suck but i give it to dizzit though Voted: John Dos / Phracture
Posted on: 2013-04-30 15:20:01