Made em famous. Posted on: 2013-03-21 03:37:12

Stephaanbishop: u have potential to do good on this site, theres some basics u need to learn tho, 1. always fill the box 2. (not necessary but advised) cap ur multies. 3. learn how to set up a punchline write. its like... u can rhyme, but its time to take it to the next level and start learning about punches, thats about it, because of the lack of punches, ur verse ended up not being as attacking as it should in a battle. Dissizit: da opener was real nice, i like how you set it up too, u stayed consistent the whole 16 wit some nice punches here and there, not much i can advise u here. aaaaaand my vote is in Voted: StephaanBishop / Phracture
Posted on: 2013-03-21 02:31:50

Good effort from Bishop but experience clearly showed here for Diss, a def Snipe, Bisop good consistency with the rhyming but like Los said its time to advance to the bigger picture, setting up Punches, stretching your multies. basically filling in the box and more use of metaphors, just learn from this battle and you'll adapt just fine . Diss had some clever line here and there but this is overkill lol. Nice 16 guys, GB and good exp for Bishop. Fv in. Voted: StephaanBishop / Phracture
Posted on: 2013-03-21 05:06:07

One needs to elevate his game. Other's a seasoned vet. Fairness dropped. #BullyTime!! Voted: StephaanBishop / Phracture
Posted on: 2013-03-22 18:52:13