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Posted on: 2013-03-20 09:37:52

SELF- you seem to have some decent skill at multis, now you need, to work on setup andd droppin stronger concept to punches.. ex. 'all day sitting mad at the screen' like nosey old neighbors? this simile is very basically done, i couldve substituted,neighbor , for BLIND DUDES PLAYIN C.O.D.. cause they cant aim and keep dyin, hence they mad.. you gotta try and get a funny angle thats a bit more deeper..a couple of other had some potential but were worded to long to the point it became forced and reaching... FLOWHAN- a bit more polished effort, multis were alot cleaner, setups for the most part consistently stayed continous to the punch, although, punches werent too hard hitting.. defeat is a helluva played concept, konys own traitor, didnt make much sense to me.. try to work on stronger concepts as well, cause you got the scheme down a bit.. fairs in... Voted: Self Quota /
Posted on: 2013-03-21 02:45:15

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Posted on: 2013-03-21 09:56:50

What ILLoKWENT said. One was a bit more polished. Voted: Self Quota /
Posted on: 2013-03-21 21:13:29

Yeah my choice flowed through his verse nicely and executed his set-ups strongly but could have provided better concepts while his opponents concepts werent that good and he also didnt execute his set-ups that good and he could have worded them differently as well.. Overall Decent battle.. Voted: Self Quota /
Posted on: 2013-03-22 12:14:35

Nice bout here. Fairs in, Q's out. Voted: Self Quota /
Posted on: 2013-03-23 01:07:02