Expo: robbery of George Clooney - Ocean's Twelve Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-03-06 09:46:22

and one more Expo : wiz of giant ass - wizard of giant ass or owner) Flat girls - girls witout normal tits) Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-03-06 09:48:10

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Posted on: 2013-03-06 09:54:01

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Posted on: 2013-03-06 10:21:07

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Posted on: 2013-03-06 16:47:39

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Posted on: 2013-03-06 19:19:08

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Posted on: 2013-03-06 19:59:23

ok..Alex.. U need to calm down brozie. get ur 1) words together, then 2) some type structure to help u deliver a pun. ur jus ramble'n really. u might wanna refer to some of ma battles... learn tha fundamentals of buildin a text bar then try this again, No disrepect famzo, but ur not gonna win anything in this form. Not jus this battle but any of. iiiiiight Zzech. Ok, Illdisect a few of ur lines. first bar why did u CAPITALIZE 'Dump Steel' it rhymes with nothing.. and as far as ur pun?? i think any1 w/ a half a brain gets 'limbo/duck bars'...whaaa ah stroke of genius.. next bar, are u implyin that ur gun was made in France?? like im lost to that... (not bein picky, jus showin u tha flaws that fuk shiii up).. Hmmmm, Bro tha powerline bar jus made me stop readin. smh, up that game homie... this ain 2007. overall this battle was won because one opponent actually threw punches Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-03-07 09:13:47

The battle of weird as fuck names Alex: You need to work on pretty much all aspects of battling. I've said it before and I'll say it again this is a RAP BATTLE you need to come w/ multis, punches, wordplay, metaphors and even just a better vocab. Also need to peep some good battlers (Good Grief, Nawkout, RULE) and see how they throw down bars and how there structure is. Work on attacking your opponent and even watch some real battles (Kotd,Don't Flop etc) and get a feel for how real battle rappers attack the person they are in a battle with. You really need to step it up because you didn't come out with anything that hit hard and you barely rhymes at points w/ no punchlines. Zech: No need to CAP anything that doesn't rhyme it really throws off your structure of the verse and makes the reader have to re read your lines just to see whats going on. You had some forced and broken multis at times but at least you understand the concept of how to set up a punchline and what a multi is. Stop putting (get it?) were not retarded we understand what a powerline and what limbo is so none of that went over anyones heads. Your concepts are very blant and played out which effects how your punches land. Need to work on creativity, flow and structure in order to elevate. Overall neither impressed me here but the winner took this because they aimed more at there opponent and had a couple jabs that had me leaning that way Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-03-07 17:32:19

koo batt, but i need mor pley... Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-03-07 18:12:43

Alex- Its very clear English is not your language of origin. I think you really need to work on your wording and making sure you are as clear as you can be. Honestly ity was tough reading your whole battle, i had to keep re-reading it to make sure i was fallowing you correctly. Just keep writing, you will improve with time no doubt. Zechs - Not bad here. You actually had some jabs that did a lil damage. Your multies are a wreck though man. If it does not fit your Multi rhyme do not CAP it, t really can throw off the reader ability to pick up on your flow, and that costs points. Overall- 1 had a hard time keeping a fluent verse and hits coming. Ther other had some jabs that landed, but needs to work on the structure of his verse. fairs in Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-03-08 01:23:10

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Posted on: 2013-03-08 10:20:03

fv Voted: AlexanderBeytuk / STRAIGHT HEAT
Posted on: 2013-03-08 13:57:22

Zechs_Merquise self voted, win reversed. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-08-07 14:59:23