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Posted on: 2013-03-05 18:37:53

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Posted on: 2013-03-05 19:00:40

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Posted on: 2013-03-05 19:02:16

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Posted on: 2013-03-05 20:54:23

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Posted on: 2013-03-06 15:05:22

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Posted on: 2013-03-06 18:55:06

JT- ion kno whaaa i jus read famzo. um, im sure ur accent plays a biiiiiiiiiiiig part but still u had no aggression towards ur opponent. seemslike u may have some dope flow in audio, but u need to adapt to this text shiiii. maybe read some battles from Dissizit, Molly, GOOD GRIEF or even maself to get a basic understandin of how a battle is supoose to look. u'll catch on as u go, but for now u shudn post opens... try shootin private battles to people ur skill level, overll ur verse needs much work to beable to trump even beginners. Radec- Were u attemptin to spell Bologna...lolz, anyway ur first bar was set up perfectly, good use of all cats. tha next concept was dope yo, lolz i miiiiight play around w/ it maself 8^).. but from there u declined.. and that closer was type 2006. overall ur verse was good for a beginner, u have understandin of how to work a box, keep elevatin tho bro... keep ur level of comp high and u'll be gooch. anyway....... this battle was won early.. one jus was better. Voted: jay tea /
Posted on: 2013-03-07 10:57:28

JT: Your verse needs a lot of work and I'm hoping its because your from South Africa that nothing really seems to rhyme. Must be your accent that is messing w/ the way your rhymes come off. You had nothing that hit hard in your verse and a lot of random filler that didn't even make sense. You need to work on all aspects of rap battling I've said it in other threads but you need to come w/ multisyllable rhymes (help the flow of your verse), metaphors, punchlines, wordplay, and even just overall better use of vocab. Go check out battles from guys like RULE, Unknown Artist or Nawkout to get a glimpse of what a real text battle verse consists of. Rad: You had a couple of broken multis that effected how smooth your flow of the verse was. You had some decent jabs thrown in here but nothing that hit hard. Need to work on coming correct w/ creative concepts so that it leads to a hard hitting punchline. I liked the face the music line it was my favorite. Overall one took this battle on every level and is just more advanced w/ bars. Fairs in Voted: jay tea /
Posted on: 2013-03-07 16:50:44

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Posted on: 2013-03-08 11:17:42