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Posted on: 2013-03-04 22:32:26

finally FUCK/er told ya I wasn't waste a time homie..dam..i ben hittin MIND up..now that I put lil time in to an decent open I may get lil attention..thanks for the spar MIND..and comment Radec..talk to yal later Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-03-04 22:39:37

sittin empty now for 14 hrs..wut the fuck Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-03-05 12:15:12

Fairs in, Q's out... Voted: ItzNDaSawce / Mind Fuck
Posted on: 2013-03-06 04:13:45

trill-first thing i notice is your tryin some complex schemes..and inners. which is good , but your fundamentals is lacking.. right now i see irelavent filler in your setups/ or first line..you start off wit spar wit me,i;ll use bats and chains, then you switch up sayin your hard to beat LACKING FACTS AND STRENGHT.. this right here makes no sense when saying it aloud.. it almost sounds like an 'ironic self diss' cause it translates to , your hard to beat, but you lack facts and strength.. you need to work on wording... change it to 'im hard to beat' if you aint got the strenght, ... you need to write your bars as if speaking naturally.. otherwise it sounds awkwaard..next wordplay is veryforced.. what does that even mean? wouldnt have been an i/L if you didnt cross the t... dont know what Radec was readin, but that shit is far from dope... it doesnt even relate to the line before it. work on relating your setups wit your endpunch. if you need to lower your rymhe schemes down, do it.. MIND- a bit more polished ,scheme wise, although ,you makin the same mistake as trill, irelavent multis, and setups.. its all filler filler, than concept...ex..your first bar, talkin bout starwars, forcing lasers downhis throat, then talkin bout box havin flow, nothing really cohesive idea wise.. coulda ended wit more starwars concepts , maybe say ya 'luke/look to hand a loss' like EMPIRE STRIKES BACK/lukeloses his hand fighting wit vader... in that movie.. last wordplay 'con still able', very forced fam... it needs to sound like constible, otherwise it doesnt work.. anyway, winner here just slightly edges it wit a bit better concepts..fairs as always Voted: ItzNDaSawce / Mind Fuck
Posted on: 2013-03-06 04:21:15

I thinks its jus you on this one ILL..cuz I could LACK STRENGTH IN MY FACTS and still be hard ta beat..or if my opponent lacks strength n facts then I will b hard to be..how u worded ur comment is almost in SWAY form..and I don't say that disrespectfully either.. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-03-06 07:26:18

and bro..its not an i /L its a lower case L dam..slow down while u read shit bro..if u CROSS a lower case L u get a T..that was easy Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-03-06 07:28:05

Classick. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-03-06 08:06:31

stand corrected on the i/l.. lookd like an I on my phone... the nameplay itself makes sense.the wording tho could have been slightly better.. in this case its probably your best line..although slightly played.. as far as your hard to bea Voted: ItzNDaSawce / Mind Fuck
Posted on: 2013-03-06 09:50:40

beat lacking facts and strength.. i still stand by what i said.. its worded poorly and my interpretation is how areyou hard to beat without facts and strength?if you mean by using balls and chains against your opponent cause your weak then i guess.. Voted: ItzNDaSawce / Mind Fuck
Posted on: 2013-03-06 09:55:37

My choice edged this by executing his set-ups stronger, neither impressed though... Trill that facts with strength line had potential but your set-up wasnt good and lacked relevance.. You could of said something like - im 'strong with the truth' but you lacking facts with strength.. But then again you want to attack your opponent as much as possible so you could have said - theres 'no type of weight behind his truth', boy you 'lacking facts with strength'.. Start putting more thought into what your saying... Also i see your from Hungary which could be effecting your wording and readability so try to be as proper as you can... Mind Fuck you were consistent throughout your verse but nothing hard hitting here... Overall ok battle.. Voted: ItzNDaSawce / Mind Fuck
Posted on: 2013-03-06 10:22:55

totally understood.jus had me defensize..but im good if ya l good..thanls Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-03-06 21:06:38

Trill all of your shit was just meh besides the crossed the T line which was pretty nice. Nothing bad, but nothing impressive. Mind, none of your stuff was great or too creative, but it was alright. You definitely beat Trill in overall creativity. But he had the best line of the battle. However, my vote is going to who was more consistent. Fair is in. Voted: ItzNDaSawce / Mind Fuck
Posted on: 2013-03-06 21:51:59

sound Voted: ItzNDaSawce / Mind Fuck
Posted on: 2013-03-07 21:47:47