jus another keystyle open verse..sumone make it hot..no personals if poss..but snipe if ya gotta..lol Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-03-01 14:24:55

I Sniped...Good shit Trill!!!! Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-03-01 15:18:49

Dammit "Epifani", why are you battling everyone? Give me a chance. Haha. Fv mates, I'm out. Voted: ItzNDaSawce / iiMAGE
Posted on: 2013-03-01 15:22:32

It's Classick Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-03-01 17:05:13

Classick!!! Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-03-01 17:10:00

Fv Voted: ItzNDaSawce / iiMAGE
Posted on: 2013-03-01 21:45:56

both need alot of work, one more so than the other.. TRILL- your droppin complex multis, but all irrelavent filler, you start out taming beef, thenyou start talkin bout bars bein a jailbird type? and how is he gonna get murked wit talons? the way its written, your basically askin him how is he gonna get murked... if you are the first he challenges.. sounds like a self diss to me... same goes for the rest of ya verse, filler , filler and more filler, til the very last bar.. which had a concept/flip but poorly executed.. cheddar, and then referencing 'cheese' in your punch is basic.. try to get more clever than obvious, maybe say 'no cheddar on them squares' playin BINGO WIT PACKER FANS.. cause fans wear them cheese on they heads.. ya feel me? get clever.. EPI- audio doesnt usually translate well in text, simply because alot of times, they come out flowin decent but looks hella basic, and your endyrymes look basic, 3 syllable at most,not much as far as concept/ puns or wordplay.. it seemd like a quick key to the both of you..ya buda pest wordplay was a decent effort, but didnt make much sense in context to the rest of your bar other than relatin 'bud' wit smoking, and sess... to hit harder you need to tie in budapest and relate it wit either the country ,or something similar, or buddah, and flip it wit a clever relation or simile.. as its written, your just statin, that trill will smoke your bud' like a freeloadin pest.. which falls flat and basic as a diss... anyway, my winner felt more natural when reading it aloud, other felt a bit more forced, fairs in. this could go eitherway tbh.. Voted: ItzNDaSawce / iiMAGE
Posted on: 2013-03-03 21:57:38

lol, forgot to adjust the rating.. weird that it still went thru.. Voted: ItzNDaSawce / iiMAGE
Posted on: 2013-03-03 21:58:48

yea I see wut ya sayin ILL..it was a quick one tho..talons/bird/jai l..how that one tied in..but thanks on the feedback Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-03-03 22:18:41