Expo - GOOGLE IT.. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-02-27 16:35:39

just barely a slight edge iin this 1! was a gud read but not the best frum both, even tho jam had sum gud concepts which i felt he brought it! the oponent just got personal with you wit sum gud punches, thats kida what edged it for me but the was a close 1 to call return the vote! Voted: Jam Jar / Apollyon
Posted on: 2013-02-27 16:44:06

ACish Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-02-27 19:47:08

Good Battle From Both but one edged for me!! The Set ups where well thought of and executed the punches really well!! The Strange Food Combo was sickk as fuckkkk!!! Good Read Here, FV NO HATE!!! Voted: Jam Jar / Apollyon
Posted on: 2013-02-27 22:51:40

One took this with the better concepts.. Tha opener is wat kilt it.. One guy opened up weak and could use better concepts or either execute them better to where they actually sting.. Fairs in nice spar session.. Voted: Jam Jar / Apollyon
Posted on: 2013-02-28 12:08:47

Entertaining read here. Fairs in, Q's out. Voted: Jam Jar / Apollyon
Posted on: 2013-02-28 18:40:26

"Jam aint good with beef" DAMN, I LITERALLY LOL. Both were smart and funny. Gb, Fv. Voted: Jam Jar / Apollyon
Posted on: 2013-03-01 14:48:25

Real hard to judge on this one...Multi's from both individuals was frickin' incredible...Pheno you did your thing wit da Channel Ya Emotions line....Fuck dat SLeeping Lovely bit was aiigh' too...JamJar you impressed me a tiny bit more wit da finisher and raps hurried part..Your like 5 percent wittier than Pheno...I'm impressed with both of you...Return the fair vote and give me a Fair Voters Club sticker by my emcee if you''ze wanna see a Dope Emcee do His THing..Good Lookin' out yo..Peace, 1. Voted: Jam Jar / Apollyon
Posted on: 2013-03-02 00:57:57

dope battle Voted: Jam Jar / Apollyon
Posted on: 2013-03-02 02:35:29

AC's Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-03-02 03:03:03

Too close. Read twice. One edged it to me somehow. Voted: Jam Jar / Apollyon
Posted on: 2013-03-02 07:00:00

Jam: id have started with ya verse got more BEEF, than MEAT IN A BURGER, but didn't matter too much when u got to the ALERTED/BURGER..then u kinda trailed off from that line into simply syllables YO n YO.REAL STEELE DEAL/ HURRY MCFLURRY? n e way..the read was enjoying but breaking it down was ugh.. Phe: wut else can I say..used ur advantage properly..and with all repect cuz im straightening up my own structure ima send ya sum bars..drop one on it which the loss I aint worried about..jus toss me back sum feed on fixin mine after u dun smashin it..Trill..ps..good batt yal Voted: Jam Jar / Apollyon
Posted on: 2013-03-02 08:53:21

JamJar- First bar, u never wanna say 'u have MEAT in anything that belongs to u, in a battle'...shiiits type gay yo. Readin on, I see u have an issue w/ Structure n Set up. Ur bars arent formed for a power punch, but more multie range. th same echo's through-out ur verse, acouple decent jabs but ur not allowin tha siiits to do whaaa they do because of ur structure. N also u spent alotta time in ur verse talkin about food.... NOT FRESH yo. Overall there's alot u can learn... read over somma ma battles or jus hmu for some ad'vice. Phenom- ur opener... kinda got ma wheels turnin... but at tha same time... ur at a point of elevation where u cuda flipped tha concept into a gem..(lightwork tho, so nothing deducted) Ur second bar, I had a concept like that...nicely done tho. Ok next bar, something i stress... it makes tha bar smoother... dont start off a bar speakin about ur opponent, then switch in tha mid of tha bar and start talkin to/at him, either speak to tha crowd or to ur opponent for tha ENTIRE bar. but nice slap overall... WATCH THOSE MUTLIES THO, Shiii got choppy af..ur closer was meeeeeeh at best.... Overall, One was on another level here. Tha Hoodz Vote. Voted: Jam Jar / Apollyon
Posted on: 2013-03-02 18:04:35