LAST LINE: My Shine Words leave him breathless So he be STARVING WHEN TRY BREATHE (Shayne Wards). Expo: 1-You should read his about before ever trying to vote. Cuz all my verse was related to it. If you're feeling lazy Ill paste his about in the next comment lol. 2- Hulk a rear = kick an ass. 3- Pelvic gerdle is a bone in each one's ass lmao. Wordplays are clear I guess. So Its LCee BodyBagging Shit. Training for the coming tourney. Diming punches. Keep yo votes fair. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-02-21 14:24:56

His about: At my school I was walking to my bus (school was out for that day) when I heard someone beat boxing. I looked around and there was this small crowd surrounding these 2 guys. The most interesting part that I saw was that they were rapping to the beat. They kept taking turns at dissing each other. I walked over and it turns out my friend was rapping. I watched the rest of the battle. My friend lost to this big black dude though. The next day at lunch my friend started rapping again and then I decided to rap to. So when he was done all of a sudden I spoke a few bars. I actually surprised myself a bit! They all yelled and "oooohhhh" and all that. The next thing I new, I was being brought over to the big black dude that beat my friend the other day. He rapped and then my friend told the black guy how he was gonna be killed by me. Someone gave me a beat and then all of a sudden my mind went blank. It was funny even though I lost. The next day though I battle the guy again. This time I rapped AND I won! So 3 months Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-02-21 14:27:28

I'm sure Xzist's gonna presume this is a hate vote, so gonna explain my vote clearly. Jankies' bars are extremely simple - one-syllable rhymes, easy rhymes at that too. Sure. Xzist's bars are barely comprehensible: looks like that don't-run-before-you -can-walk syndrome. It's hard to detect a flow because it's badly written. Although it's clear which concept you are attempting to use, it is so so forced it barely makes sense. 'HULK A REAR' doesn't make sense on its own and 'WHOLE CAREER' doesn't work in the sentence. So although Xzist probably is a better rapper in total - he knows the ropes of LB more so he should be - I'm gonna have to give it to Jankies because although his bars were way simple, they had one thing that X's didn't: they made sense. Voted: Jankies / Brute
Posted on: 2013-02-21 16:53:48

Makes no sense My shit is 8-9 Shit. Yeah its a retarded one. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-02-21 17:13:09

I think it's a pretty raw battle. I think I did decent for this being my second battle on this site. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-02-21 23:55:41

I meant his vote is retarded. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-02-22 00:05:24

Fv. Voted: Jankies / Brute
Posted on: 2013-02-22 02:14:06

Multis is what took this battle for me. One had it with the multis but both need to elevate Voted: Jankies / Brute
Posted on: 2013-02-24 03:10:20