This was an easy one. Good shit Maccy D vb if you can fam. No hate shy knife keep up the work bruh. http://www.le tsbeef.com/battle_de tails.php?id=455352& roundID=1§ion=tb Voted: ShyKnife / Maccy D
Posted on: 2013-02-18 17:00:19

Didnt forget you actually lmao. LCee! Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-02-18 17:14:16

typo: GUYS TOURS OF HIS PLACE* Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-02-18 18:39:11

okay, SHYNIFE, first of all, repeating your name almost everyline is a waste of space, not to mention, much of your content lacked any actual punches, just straight up hyping yourself witout any real attacks aimed at your opponent.flow was aight, basic endrymes tho, thats something you need to improve upon.. MACCY D- your tryin to drop multis and some of it works but others ex. TYPE OF KID TO WORRY spit fire I SMILE WHILE A BURN THEE . your rhyme emphasis on certain words are off which throws the flow off.. burn thee was matched better, and syllable was off 6 from the first and 5 for the second.. try to keep the sound emphasis the same wit each word as much as possible, and say it aloud, youll hear the difference in flow.. as far as content, some decent setups but lacked in creative metaphors and puns... probably your best line was the bejamnin button, imo, but it still was worded weak..your 'rethink bars and edit them' like game did in my life? how does the simile relate wit the quoted concept? so game made you rethink bars and edit them.. just doesnt make sense from a battle perspective.. anyway, both need to pay attention to some vet battles, and read the tutorial, you 'll pick up some basic fundamentals that'll improve your game.. good luckq Voted: ShyKnife / Maccy D
Posted on: 2013-02-21 02:57:41

Musta been a Snipe... Want that rematch SkyKnife? Send 8 Voted: ShyKnife / Maccy D
Posted on: 2013-02-21 21:18:46