Expo: Lacrosse is like soccer and hockey mixed... Pittsburgh's defense used to be called the steel curtain... Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-02-17 19:21:02

you should stop putting out ALOT of battles and start putting out Good Battles. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-02-17 19:21:48

Good Luck Homie ~1~ Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-02-17 19:53:13

One had an overall better verse with a stronger understanding of structure and basic fundamentals. Loser had some potential but needs some polishing and a little work on structure and set ups and punches. Voted: -Acid / J-HuNNiD
Posted on: 2013-02-17 20:02:21

My choice got this with better wording but both lacked in a lot of categories.. Acid its nice to see you set-up your punches nicely but the concepts are weak and im about to make an example out of your lacrosse goalie line.. your set-up is block and shots.. How many other things involve blocking shots?? Theres basketball, hockey, soccer, a boxer blocks shots.. See where im getting at?? J-hunndid Cap your multies, provide 3-6 syllable multies, and dont use 1 word multies.. Set-up your punches with relevant references or metaphors pertaining to your multies like how your opponent did with the Lacrosse line... Also dont decorate your verse with // cuz you wanna be able to say as much as possible and also always attack your opponent.. Voted: -Acid / J-HuNNiD
Posted on: 2013-02-21 13:28:44

Oh yeah overall not to good of a battle and if a tip list is wanted then ask.. Voted: -Acid / J-HuNNiD
Posted on: 2013-02-21 13:31:42

dc Voted: -Acid / J-HuNNiD
Posted on: 2013-02-21 16:48:50