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Text Ranked Battle
Length: 16 Lines

-Grafik- (73%) WINNER

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Ranked #-- This Season

Reppin: Camden, New Jersey, United States

Jam Jar (27%)

Ranked #-- This Season

Reppin: London, England, United Kingdom

-Grafik-

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Death of JamJar.. When I RECITE THE PAGE, you wanna throw your MIC AWAY then HIDE-YOUR-FACE RIGHT-AWAY then HIBERNATE from LIGHT OF DAY../ It's my TIME TO REIGN, i'm bringing heat like MICROWAVES, the RHYMES I SAY can unWIND AND BREAK the binds of TIME AND SPACE/ I'm SMASHING GEEKS SAVAGELY, lacking APATHY NATURALLY/ while i LAUGH AT THESE WHACK EMCEE's who can't RAP ABOVE AVERAGE, SEE/ This is MY-HOUSE this guy is put on TIME-OUT/ so take this TIME-NOW to reevaluate your RHYME-STYLE.../ I-DOUBT you're ever pulling the NINE-OUT/ That's just something we don't see, like Nicki Minaj's real EYEBROWS../ PIPE-DOWN, you can't match to MY-SOUND/ Everything you WRITE-DOWN BY-NOW should be WHIPED-OUT/ With WHITE-OUT.. It is way too late to CRY-NOW/ Please, put the MIC-DOWN so you can pave the way to MY-CROWN/ It's MINE (how?) cause i'm holding the DICE-NOW/ You don't want an audio beef, you'll die from words in MY-MOUTH/ wooowww.. If you try to challenge me, you'll FIND OUT/ You could not last a single round up in a RHYME-BOUT/ You'll just dig yourself a bigger grave that you can't CLIMB-OUT/ You don't wanna DIE-PAL, you should just give up and say BYE-NOW/ I've seen Amy WHINEHOUSE putting better LINES-OUT!/

Jam Jar

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Can you feel the earth quake SUBTERRANEAN SHAKING? That’s the THUNDERING DRAG of my BODYBAG TWITCHING. Need a new hobby CLUB? try IRANIAN BAKING Put this BLUNDERING FAG’s BODY BACK IN THE KITCHEN! Soo KEEP IMPROVING then one day you MAY BE MEDIOCRE if the SHEEP IS MOVING count it coz the DAYDREAM IS OVER. Let’sBeef won’t find your SIMPLES PLEASING boredom beamed on PC SCREENS – Deodorize, get PIMPLE-SQUEEZING, there’s facial creams for GREASY TEENS. Flashed your profile to my CREWMAN ILLOKWENT, he said “I abhor GRAFIK’S MIX OF DATA” I said “Ill that’s true but TOO GRANDILOQUENT” Instead I’ll just say GRAFIK’S PICS-ILL-HATED!/’PIXILATED’. I hate you too, yes I’m hating his SHIT RAPS, like chewing an Atlas, I’ll leave Grafik with ‘BIT-MAPS’. You've got no flow you're a TOKEN STIFF shown about as much action as a BROKEN ‘GIF’. Not even ‘Photoshop’ could fix your FATAL FLAWS I mind-read your Mom in her POST-NATAL PAUSE – She thought “If I’d have known about his HORRIBLE FEATURES, I would have SLAUGHTERED and ABORTED this ADOMINABLE CREATURE”. The fact you’re uglier than her is her ONLY BASIS for wanting to thank her LONELY RAPIST.  You got drowned by AC’s KIND PARAGON so FLOAT AWAY, GRAFIK – you were hopeless like BLIND MARATHONS IN MOTORWAY TRAFFIC.

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Battle started: February 11^th 2013 at 17:02
Challenger joined: February 17^th 2013 at 12:33

Voting has ended for this battle (battle finished on 2013-02-17 12:33:39).

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Aggo <AC's> One Bar Champion Tag Team Champion Fair Voters Club	AC's Are Crazy! Comment Only Posted on: 2013-02-17 12:52:09
Black Book <GSchemeSho>	Grafik, you can carry a scheme pretty well. Unfortunately, you did this by only using a two syllable scheme in the second half of your verse. And you don't really throw any punches. You're just raffling off lines in sort of a cypher-like way. Jam, you had the same thing with your verse. I feel like some of the vocabulary you use hurts your bars. Like they just don't flow well... This is a tough decision cuz both had the same problems and about same skill level here. I'm giving to one because I feel they had a few more jabs. It's a coin toss though. Voted: -Grafik- / Jam Jar Posted on: 2013-02-17 13:59:38
InZane™	JamJar goes DamnHard! Wooo AC's! Comment Only Posted on: 2013-02-18 14:29:42
InZane™	Like A penis, and some viagra, and throw a dam in.. you make the joke I cba. Comment Only Posted on: 2013-02-18 14:30:25
Rhifle	one definitely had the smoother flow but weak multi-syllables.. the other had stronger delivery and was more creative with his schemes and wordplay.. Voted: -Grafik- / Jam Jar Posted on: 2013-02-19 02:35:15
Streetz De Hood Basic Member	wow somebody else from camden's on here. im excited! n shoutout to my ac ganger. not gon vote but not too bad of a battle fellas keep it up n get in that tourney Comment Only Posted on: 2013-02-20 08:04:50
Phroxen <CXXII>	This was an odd battle to judge.. but I kinda liked it. GRAFIK: Your flow and structure were butter. Motherfuckin butter. The syllable count between bars sounded natural.. you mixed in jokes with aggression.. the Nicki Minaj shit was hilarious, and the setup was very nice & fluid. The end kinda tapered off a bit, otherwise you would've scored higher. JAMJAR: Hmm. You know how to rhyme.. and utilize concepts.. and be articulate.. but there wasn't really any cohesion. Some of your wording didn't sound natural (even if you're ultra nerdy, it didn't sound natural). Then you had some decent concepts but their execution was very poor.. they needed better setups to carry an impact. For instance.. the pixelated and bitmap concepts.. "pics ill hated" kinda works as a play on words, pronunciation-wise.. but definition wise? No way. As a punch, saying someone's pic is "ill hated" is supposed to be dissing them? Not in the least. Then the bitmap wordplay had the same issue.. yeah, yeah "bit/chew" "map/atlas".. but you're leaving him with bit Maps? What maps? wtf would that even mean? The word association shit (Photoshop, Bitmap, Gif, Pixelated....) doesn't really do anything when those ideas aren't connecting in a way that's harmful, funny, or creative. If they just sit there stagnant on the page, it doesn't help that their only link is that they're associated with each other. Your last bar, in its entirety, was piff. The setup made sense, the multi was fire, and the punch was both funny and aggressive. Write more shit like that, and less shit like "I abhor Grafik's mix of data" and you'll be nice. Voted: -Grafik- / Jam Jar Posted on: 2013-02-20 13:46:29


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