damn both these were fire Voted: Shezso Eu / WaDe JaYare
Posted on: 2013-01-27 11:44:23

DOPE BATTLE FV VB Voted: Shezso Eu / WaDe JaYare
Posted on: 2013-01-27 13:01:19

Prince, you're getting better with those multies. You were unable to keep one set consistent, that was in the middle: Went from "LOST IS SAD TO SEE"(5) to "POPS MAD AT ME"(4) and "BOSH FANTASIES"(4) ... I understand this was to have the punchline intact syllable wise, but you could have compensated. Aside from that, I felt this was a decent verse. To be honest, I felt as if you only had one real punch and that was actually the "Craving D. Wade" line, which was marred by the broken multi. If that had been smoothed out, it was a potential haymaker. The rest of your stuff was either played or forced. Piece Ughs wordplay? Horrible. Along those lines, your concept conversion were vague and half-baked. You're improving though, concentrate on keeping multies fixed and keeping your concepts simplistic: The D. Wade line could have been really heavy, believe me. Wade, it was alright. Your structure was clean and tight throughout, with a few conceptual tumours you could have cut away. I could see a lot of filler in the first half, as the first line I felt from you was the Heat/D.Wade reference. I didn't know also whether to infer that as a flip. The acronym play was a bit annoying to read and a poor excuse for something dope in a battle. Anyone can do it. That being said the P.E/EP play was decent, but not amazingly original. The second half of punches were alright, nothing that stuck out, but structurally tighter and more readable. This is a hard one, because one side has a tad more consistency but a lot of structural flaws, the other side has less consistency but is tighter all-round and more readable. Virtually a coinflip going with the verse that gives me a gut-feeling. Vitty's vote's in. Voted: Shezso Eu / WaDe JaYare
Posted on: 2013-01-27 13:22:55

Not bad nice battle Voted: Shezso Eu / WaDe JaYare
Posted on: 2013-01-27 13:26:13

more complex wit the winner. i like this battle guys, need more like them. Voted: Shezso Eu / WaDe JaYare
Posted on: 2013-01-28 11:14:33