Fairs in fellas, got my winner! Posted on: 2013-01-23 11:47:00

Expos: The first bar is all pro line references, so if you have never played a pro line ticket then pay attention or google that shit....'Willing to bet' as in when you bet money on a team in pro line...'Tossed in no time' when you lose a pro line ticket you throw it away...'Chose the wrong squad' was how you would lose the pro line ticket... and finally 'Lost ya Pro lines' is the double meaning punch. The 'grey hound cat' refers to the guy who chopped some guys head off on a grey hound bus Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-01-22 19:04:29

ACish tho. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-01-22 19:15:05

OK Voted: SpleNDiD / Manhattan
Posted on: 2013-01-22 19:20:53

SpleNDiD: Your multies were smooth and your flow was pretty solid. A bit basic and there was some filler, but it was solid. The punches didn't hit too hard cuz the concepts were a bit too basic. Manhattan: You had some creative concepts but you had problems with the multies to me. 3 times you had a punch where you only kept the scheme for two multies. You need to step that up a bit. Carry the scheme longer cuz it helps the flow. Some bars were a bit played but you were still pretty nice. Fair is in. One came more creative and had better punches. Low to Low. Voted: SpleNDiD / Manhattan
Posted on: 2013-01-22 19:27:02

One had harder punches. Fairs in. Voted: SpleNDiD / Manhattan
Posted on: 2013-01-22 20:04:46

splendid, Teo's Girlfriend aint rhyme with nothing, It Wasn't Smooth Multies Were Off In A Few Spots, And Concepts Were Eh. Dr, Your Verse Was Polished Up A Bit More Than Your Opponents, The Stars On The Ground Joint Was A Nice Concept. Could Have Maybe Been Worded A Lil Better But Still Dope... You Slowly Declined After That Line With The Lines But Was Still Hitting, Like A Haymaker Then You STarted Jabbin Or Something, The Whole Pro Line References SHould've Been Replaced With A Different Idea, It Just Wasn't Hitting For Me, YHou Would've Saved Space For Other Punches In Doing That As Well.. But Over All Nice Battle.. Votes In. Voted: SpleNDiD / Manhattan
Posted on: 2013-01-22 20:58:52

One jus threw more n better punches. But Both of u guys need to do better. These 8 boxes dont give much room to play. Splendid: ur structure is type confusin homie, and on top of that alot of tha multies down fit together. Some of ur punches were kinda weak sauce aswell, I thought even some of tha punches that were iiiiight had less than notable build-ups. ion kno br, i ain never seen u work, i thought u were God-Piff from tha hype around u, so imma call this shiii RUST. Dr. Ur structure made for better read, also u threw some personals in, i fuk w/ that type shiii heavy. U also had some weak punchlines but still tha flow n set-ups made for a decent verse. Overall, This was an ok battle, NOTHING MORE. Tha Hoodz Vote Voted: SpleNDiD / Manhattan
Posted on: 2013-01-22 21:30:40

No Need For Expos Vs No Expos Voted: SpleNDiD / Manhattan
Posted on: 2013-01-22 22:12:33

Winner took it more seriously... FV in Voted: SpleNDiD / Manhattan
Posted on: 2013-01-23 01:07:16

It's nice to see SpleNDiD back here doing his thing for sure, that foodstamp line was nice. The other had two lines that really wow'd me actually. Hope to work with you guys in the future on a cypher or something. Holla @ me. Voted: SpleNDiD / Manhattan
Posted on: 2013-01-23 04:03:50

SplenDiD: The multis were on-point & the flow was smooth as fuck, but the majority of your verse was filler. The ideas were decently fresh, but not executed properly.. and the punch in your opener doesnt even stick to the rhyme scheme for the line. The food stamp line was the best line you had. Doc. Manhattan: Your multis were eh, but you had some really creative concepts, not all of them were executed all to well though. Your verse had it's ups & downs had a problem w/ Consistancy..... overall: Close battle... but the one with the harder punches & remain the most consistant got it. Voted: SpleNDiD / Manhattan
Posted on: 2013-01-23 10:41:52

Um, shit... I'll brb to vote again... voted for the wrong person by accident Voted: SpleNDiD / Manhattan
Posted on: 2013-01-23 10:42:33

personally ilike 'punchlines' vs 'multies' any day! this is who i just thought took it! Voted: SpleNDiD / Manhattan
Posted on: 2013-01-23 12:18:48

Yo Splendid lets have a Rematch .... think i beat you once already .... :high: .... Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-01-23 14:15:27

where is dudes punches ? Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-01-23 15:29:04

FV Voted: SpleNDiD / Manhattan
Posted on: 2013-01-23 19:57:06

uuuuummmmm....Fair Is In...expected more from one tho... Voted: SpleNDiD / Manhattan
Posted on: 2013-01-23 21:06:35

@SpleNDiD I had 6 punches in 8 lines LOL at "wheres dudes punches" Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-01-24 12:16:35

Pretty simple, one had punches throughout. The other had a few concepts that came out half-baked in conversion. Vitty's vote's in. Voted: SpleNDiD / Manhattan
Posted on: 2013-01-24 18:33:27

joe yuh, gots tuh bee da wun ta jus kil at wel n nev gev up wit enythin... keep gev'n itt spin, and baleeb mei sumwun shod att, butt there there, aye stel need moh. both went ta du pen tuh git att bird, suhn...i'm tokn tuh um... Voted: SpleNDiD / Manhattan
Posted on: 2013-01-24 20:12:58

he got with punches tbh Voted: SpleNDiD / Manhattan
Posted on: 2013-01-24 20:20:46