Exop: George Foreman Grills (you should get that) Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-01-21 15:05:09

You Got Potential PA, It Seems That At This Stage You're Focus Shouldnt Be Solely On Making Things Rhyme Though; Tana, Your Ishs Cool But You Couldve Executed So Many Lines So Much Better (The Dimes/Nines Line Would Sound Miles Better In Reverse). Not Voting For Own Reasons. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-01-21 15:18:19

Nice!! GL! Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-01-21 15:27:56

damnn DaMN DAAAMNN! Voted: PossiblyAwkward / Shezso Eu
Posted on: 2013-01-21 15:46:17

lolol...uz a trip purp Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-01-21 15:47:16

ones multis worked better. going second is a big advantage though. FV Voted: PossiblyAwkward / Shezso Eu
Posted on: 2013-01-21 16:01:58

only a 5 is a little harsh. I gotchu then. Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-01-21 16:17:08

Damn..one had multies down with a funny ass beginning and the other has good concepts. Gotta go with what I feel! Close ass battle! Please vote back! Voted: PossiblyAwkward / Shezso Eu
Posted on: 2013-01-21 16:45:31

Ima be surprised as hell if I win lol Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-01-21 16:46:19

1 sounds like there tryna rhyme words, ther just came harder! 100 ONLY FAIR! Voted: PossiblyAwkward / Shezso Eu
Posted on: 2013-01-21 17:12:45

gb Voted: PossiblyAwkward / Shezso Eu
Posted on: 2013-01-21 17:13:03

fv Voted: PossiblyAwkward / Shezso Eu
Posted on: 2013-01-21 18:38:14

ShyKnife hate votes are beyond. this is the 3rd time.. can a mod get him outta here? Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-01-21 19:12:39

I've seen better but gb Voted: PossiblyAwkward / Shezso Eu
Posted on: 2013-01-21 19:16:53

beast fv Voted: PossiblyAwkward / Shezso Eu
Posted on: 2013-01-21 19:43:36

Laaamme Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-01-21 19:59:33

Whoops that was supposed to have been said on a different battle lol Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-01-21 20:18:30

PA, you get way better every fucking time I read your verses, but Prince S be on that heavyweight shit and I am definitely battling both you one day for damn sure! I gotta stay relevant and you guys are the future for sure. Good opener and closer for the 2nd verse, wow'd me for sure. Voted: PossiblyAwkward / Shezso Eu
Posted on: 2013-01-22 03:34:07

PA, conceptually, you still need a lot of work on your bars. I think maybe you understand the attitude approach to a punchline but not the technicalities that make it an actual punchline. As I said, look up double entendre, that's a basic building block. You seem to be improving multi-wise, although there's still unnecessary parts to your multies. First line had a broken multi in it, could have changed FISH to FISHY and it wouldn't have been broken. You need to follow the same scheme when constructing the punchline aswell, no point leaving the first few syllables behind. Alright, now overall, talking about one aspect (in this case, Tana's apparently fishy vagina) for 4 lines is a waste of space. Second half of the verse looks like you had more of a reformed attempt at punches but they fell off completely. Keep grinding, do some more research. Tana, not the best I've seem from you. You were clean-cut multi-wise throughout, no complaints there. You stretched for a while before the first punch, more or less half the verse (4-5 lines) before the first jab. Not a very good one ever, with a haphazard half-arsed wordplay. Blow minds/Brain crimes has no original connection either. Football stores punch was vague, seems to be inserted for the sake of keeping the scheme. Foremen/4men wordplay? I understand the connection to the grill, but that didn't seem to go anywhere. Closer was extremely vague, why would a white girl be in an awkward position on all fours? The reference is redundant, again, you seem to be creating punches purely for the scheme rather than building your verse on punches and working the scheme within it. Both have their flaws but one was definitely overall more polished and more established. Keep elevating. Vitty's vote's in. Voted: PossiblyAwkward / Shezso Eu
Posted on: 2013-01-22 04:30:47

Fv Voted: PossiblyAwkward / Shezso Eu
Posted on: 2013-01-22 07:11:28

Fv Voted: PossiblyAwkward / Shezso Eu
Posted on: 2013-01-22 13:25:42

this was pretty onesided tbh, winner had more defined concepts, a bit more polished schemes, loser had a decent flow, but the multis werent matchin up for the most part, disses were a tad on the basic side as well..fairs in... Voted: PossiblyAwkward / Shezso Eu
Posted on: 2013-01-23 01:33:36

One Sided Here But Wasn't A Body...Fair Is In...The Low Is Because One Was Really Forcing Their Lines And Other Didn't Connect Very Well With The Delivery/Punch. Keep It Up Voted: PossiblyAwkward / Shezso Eu
Posted on: 2013-01-23 21:29:41

fv Voted: PossiblyAwkward / Shezso Eu
Posted on: 2013-01-24 08:27:26

killshot^ Good battle prince s Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-01-24 09:48:07

close Voted: PossiblyAwkward / Shezso Eu
Posted on: 2013-01-24 09:53:10

hmm Voted: PossiblyAwkward / Shezso Eu
Posted on: 2013-01-24 09:57:10

gj awk, fv Voted: PossiblyAwkward / Shezso Eu
Posted on: 2013-01-24 11:28:33

One took this with them punches. Both did there thing but overall one just dropped better bars. Good spar here Voted: PossiblyAwkward / Shezso Eu
Posted on: 2013-01-24 13:12:18

fv trying to get this level Voted: PossiblyAwkward / Shezso Eu
Posted on: 2013-01-24 13:27:40

I got blasted into failville in the past 3 hours lol Comment Only
Posted on: 2013-01-24 13:36:04

U should work on rhymes PA no offense tho Voted: PossiblyAwkward / Shezso Eu
Posted on: 2013-01-24 14:57:39