Take 4!.... Lion Witch And The Wardrobe/Rapunzel/ Christopher Walkenthrough is a guy on Machinima who impersonates Christopher Walken playing video games, shits mad funny you should def check it on youtube if you haven't /Sleeping Dogs the game for anyone living under a rock. Wei Shen is the main character from Sleeping Dogs Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-12-27 07:16:24

Expo - Christopher Reeve fell off a horsey and became a quadriplegic. 'Egit' means 'clownish fool'. Good battle brother. Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-12-27 07:34:45

gb fv it is...1 jus went in start to finish Voted: J u s T C / Jam Jar
Posted on: 2012-12-27 07:38:41

LOL oh shit AC's Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-12-27 07:47:32

Kapow. Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-12-27 07:57:01

The fair's in. Voted: J u s T C / Jam Jar
Posted on: 2012-12-27 09:04:36

fv Voted: J u s T C / Jam Jar
Posted on: 2012-12-27 09:08:19

very awsome battle nice open and good comback.. peace JJ Voted: J u s T C / Jam Jar
Posted on: 2012-12-27 09:57:49

Fairs in $EOS$ Voted: J u s T C / Jam Jar
Posted on: 2012-12-27 11:51:13

Just: you did alright. Nothing to impressive. There weren't any serious build ups to punches. You threw a lot of jabs though. Work on setting up big punches with jabs, though. Jam: you are just using a lot of filler. There aren't any real punches. Maybe a couple of jabs. But a lot of your lines are just rambling nonsense. "Left ya LEGS AKIMBO - NICE!" what does that mean? Akimbo is double? So you left him with two legs? Not sure what you're trying to say. Overall, one got this easily but wasn't that impressive either. Fair is in. Voted: J u s T C / Jam Jar
Posted on: 2012-12-27 14:50:33

Legs akimbo means legs wide apart. If you don't understand it's not necessarily my fault. Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-12-27 14:57:08

Just came with more punches in this one, but I did like a couple of Jam's punches. it just wasn't really enough to come bacc to what Just said. Voted, Fair. Do the same. Voted: J u s T C / Jam Jar
Posted on: 2012-12-27 20:24:23

Appreciate fairs - thanks Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-12-27 20:41:39

Eazy one just made more sense to me no hate fais in... like always ill be droping fairs all night so keep the votes rollin... Voted: J u s T C / Jam Jar
Posted on: 2012-12-27 21:56:04

cant vote on this , same crew Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-12-28 02:24:34

fv Voted: J u s T C / Jam Jar
Posted on: 2012-12-28 07:51:58

Now I've rated fairly low here, but there's reasoning behind it. Just C: my dude you showed your experience here, but I fear you've kinda gotten to a point in battling where you're very much set in your ways, I find you almost frustrating to read at times because you're more than capable of progressing and fucking with the top heads both text and audio, yet you don't. I understand you like to focus on audio - your reads are usually fairly smooth reflecting that - but a little motivation and you could be one of the all-round all-time greats. Some of the concepts are a little choppy and stretched in places eg. the lion witch bar just seemed too disjointed for me; I get you had the nursery shit (that rapunzel shit was clever as hell, took me a read or two to pick up admittedly but when I spotted it it had me leaning), but the prelude to that seemed out of place and a little soft. All in all a decent verse - no less than expected - but unfortunately no more than expected either. JJ: your shit was ok, fairly smooth and a well crafted verse. However there was a lot of played and basic punchlines in there (spaghetti, donkey punch; all very obvious). Your rhyme structures were off in places and didn't match up for me; try reading all your shit aloud first of all, then try reading over your bars fairly quickly, I find this helps to pick up if it reads well and the multies match up smoothly or if they're clumsy & a little off, which some of yours seemed to be here. In all you have the potential to flourish here, just try to be more creative with your concepts and bars and make sure your shit matches up accordingly. "it's about quality punches, not the quality of 'em" - reEFer; apt advice. Decent spar though gentlemen, it's always fair and always constructive. PYROshit Voted: J u s T C / Jam Jar
Posted on: 2012-12-28 11:35:24

obasically the winner here executed w/ punches that were relevent to concepts in the erse for an understanable read and able-bodied verese where the loser has strange spelling and misusuage of words ALOT which impacted his verse entirely// GONZO vote Voted: J u s T C / Jam Jar
Posted on: 2012-12-28 15:17:27

Just C: that narnia punch was ILL man. the closer was cool. the rest was too simple for my taste. Jam: right of the first line... that multi was forced man. as for the rest... it was MAD basic. work on creativity and complexity. fv. Voted: J u s T C / Jam Jar
Posted on: 2012-12-29 02:39:58

fv Voted: J u s T C / Jam Jar
Posted on: 2012-12-29 11:16:06

Gb Voted: J u s T C / Jam Jar
Posted on: 2012-12-29 19:21:59

both came tough only one can take the victory Voted: J u s T C / Jam Jar
Posted on: 2012-12-30 03:47:06

Thanks for feedback Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-12-30 07:35:51

FYB Comment Only
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