both were dope , fv. Voted: opFOR / Adubs KiloG
Posted on: 2012-12-27 00:13:34

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Posted on: 2012-12-27 01:45:02

some nice ish by both... be back to vote Voted: opFOR / Adubs KiloG
Posted on: 2012-12-27 02:24:09

Fv hard to decide but vote is in no hate Voted: opFOR / Adubs KiloG
Posted on: 2012-12-27 02:26:44

One could be dope if he polished his wordplay & set-ups, real dope potential shown in this battle from both, but I'm leaning one way coz of more creative concepts. Voted: opFOR / Adubs KiloG
Posted on: 2012-12-27 08:55:44

I couldnt really do personals because I started an open text battle.. please keep that in mind Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-12-27 11:45:33

LCEE IN THIS BITCH Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-12-27 13:23:33

My winner had some slightly forced wording and concepts but came better overall in pretty much all categories. Fairs. Voted: opFOR / Adubs KiloG
Posted on: 2012-12-28 02:40:50

this was actually a close battle, one had a clean verse but lacked in concepts/flips, other had concept/ similes but read very choppy because of the extra hyphens and dashes, and brackets... you got the wordplay down , now you need to learn to setup or buildup towards those concepts, otherwise they read lookin like one line jabs... my winner edged it wit although less concepts, his verse read alot cleaner, and smoother.. fairs in Voted: opFOR / Adubs KiloG
Posted on: 2012-12-28 03:32:00

dis wuzz a very close battle to me. opFOR: very impressive for ur first battle ive seen bro. very consistent,creativit y was there,multiz were good,all around good start. the only problem i had wit yo verse was it wuzz a lil choppy so it wuzz hard to read. my eyez were all over da place tryin to find da next bar u put down. ur setups were a lil sloppy as well,but dat could easily be fixed.other den dat,u checked out pretty good,keep it up. Adubs KiloG: very nice read my dude. multiz and setups were clean as a whistle, ur punchez landed in da necessary areaz. ur creativity was impressive as well and da overall flow is wut polished it and made it easier to read. now ur punchez landed well,but were a lil weak in my opinion. other den dat,very nice battle,very close,but my vote went to da one dat edged it for me,very nice read from both sides. Fair Votes in yall Voted: opFOR / Adubs KiloG
Posted on: 2012-12-28 08:13:29

This was a pretty sick battle here. One was a lil fresher in concepts, But structure killed the flow and momentum of his bars. (clean the verse up and you gonna be straight) the other had a much simpler verse as far as concepts go, but for me the smoothness of it made the punches hit better. Could be close depending on what you put value on as a voter here. For me readability and flow go a long way. Fairs in. Voted: opFOR / Adubs KiloG
Posted on: 2012-12-28 11:55:40

OpFor: You had some real nice lines in there just need to work on the set ups. The concepts were solid and you had some good multis and the punches were on point. Work on structure and relevant set ups is all. Dubs: You had a couple of good lines in here but a lot of the more basic lines and I could call out your punches before I even saw them. The concepts are there but you lacking hard hitting punches and your set ups just need a little more fire to them. Voted: opFOR / Adubs KiloG
Posted on: 2012-12-28 12:20:30

killllled it i didnt know who to pick Voted: opFOR / Adubs KiloG
Posted on: 2012-12-28 12:54:02

Both was good, close call but 1 just slightly took it for me. GB FV VBF Voted: opFOR / Adubs KiloG
Posted on: 2012-12-28 13:24:18

Bars Voted: opFOR / Adubs KiloG
Posted on: 2012-12-28 14:08:41

fuck you Voted: opFOR / Adubs KiloG
Posted on: 2012-12-28 16:21:03

not bad needs work though. Voted: opFOR / Adubs KiloG
Posted on: 2012-12-29 13:12:21

Good Shit from both fv Voted: opFOR / Adubs KiloG
Posted on: 2012-12-29 19:40:08

This was a really close one, but I felt ones vocab was a lil better than the other, also with punches...I was also told that flippin' or feeding is bad??...so that could be a factor? Voted: opFOR / Adubs KiloG
Posted on: 2012-12-29 19:48:56

This is what happens when you are a dumb fuck Adubu KiloG, i hope you enjoy your loss and spend that time sucking your cock Voted: opFOR / Adubs KiloG
Posted on: 2012-12-29 20:51:20

Well, this can be marked as one of the hottest out Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-12-31 15:08:02