TYPO....So You'll 'Catch A Break'* Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-12-23 23:59:32

wow..somethin tells me this will stick for a minute. im too damn rusty to even try. Good bars though lol Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-12-24 00:02:41

close battle here, felt one's concepts were a bit cleaner in execution.. fairs in Voted: Xplissit /
Posted on: 2012-12-24 01:51:35

GB no h8 Voted: Xplissit /
Posted on: 2012-12-24 03:08:33

Classick. Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-12-24 03:22:56

no messing Voted: Xplissit /
Posted on: 2012-12-24 05:14:50

leaning this way slightly, just felt there were better executed concepts that produced slightly harder punches Voted: Xplissit /
Posted on: 2012-12-24 09:48:12

I have to say, both have clearly elevated a great deal. I didn't see many forced lines throughout both verses to be fair. Aside from both the closers, all of the punches were clear and smooth. I liked X's understated opener, started off simple, whilst making good use of only two syllables which shows versatility. "Pull the Plug" worked for the concept but didn't line up with the punchline as much. Nice schemework from that point onwards. No haymakers as such, but you had two unforced punches that worked on the scheme alone, which is always refreshing. Closer was a bit unclear, maybe because you ran out of space, you didn't have enough room for the references that would have completed it. Overall, one of the better verses I've seen from you. Jimmy, your opener was good: You managed to create a rich bar within 1 1/2 lines. Wordplay was a little dodgy when addressing it in terms of the punchline. Two Llamas on Deck was a great gunplay concept, however, I felt you ended on the wrong rhyme, or at least, you should have used one more "Noah's Ark/Loads of Darts" multi set to in order to reinstate that that was the set you were going to finish on. It came off as a bit awkward and abrupt, scheme-wise. Mermaid,man line was meh. Bit rushed and empty. Last line was a bit rushed also, "live in a bucket"? I understand what you mean, but it's extremely vague. It's not an orthodox phrase for someone ending up dead. I like the continuation of Spongebob but it had to be a bit more special to become a great closer. Certainly impressed by both verses: Punches are coming out a lot smoother and unassuming. The win goes to consistency and readability. I felt they had less forced lines that the other also. Vitty's vote's in. Voted: Xplissit /
Posted on: 2012-12-24 09:57:35

Appreciate the vote Vitty Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-12-24 10:05:49

Both came pretty good. However, one was smoother and clearer with their concepts. Neither threw a real haymaker but their were some alright punches. Good jabs. One was a little vague with their concepts and didn't execute as well as they could. Their concepts were better but their execution wasn't up to par with their opponent. That is why I'm slightly leaning the way I am. The winner executed better, leading to better punches overall. Voted: Xplissit /
Posted on: 2012-12-24 11:20:06

lucky charms vs sausages lol i got my vote for tha meat aint shit sweet here bout lucky charms Voted: Xplissit /
Posted on: 2012-12-24 12:39:56

X had some good wordplay and punches, It also flowed nicely. Jimmy's started out good to me but then fell apart after the first couple lines, I didn't get the Heart plus a joint part if he's going to be "Under water" and the Table sets line and the line following, I didn't really understand. Voted, Fair. Do the same. Voted: Xplissit /
Posted on: 2012-12-24 13:03:44

both were good just felt like one had it fv. Voted: Xplissit /
Posted on: 2012-12-24 13:07:33

fv vb Voted: Xplissit /
Posted on: 2012-12-24 23:34:15

overall great battle. Xplissit: loved ur verse. da punchez were landin and da multiz were sick. da flow wuzz good, the only think dat got me da vote was my confusion wit da WIFI line. for sum reason it didnt make sense to me,cuz isnt WIFI wireless? haha yea but loved da material. Jimmy Dean: loved da overall verse,da flow wuzz on point and da multiz were sick. da punchez landed very nicely and ur delivery was good. da only thing i have to say about your entry was da last line. it confused me as well. haha no h8 towards nobody but overall,based on my observation and da key points i directed were pretty straight forward. overall sick ass battle. Fair Vote is in. Voted: Xplissit /
Posted on: 2012-12-26 07:18:26