Aiight fellas. I got my winner. V I felt started off on some played shit, but then he really picked it up and schemed out till the end with some fresh concepts and funny jabs too. MF was more up and down, I was feeling feeling his swag and personals, his middle bars were his best imo tho and concepts fell off a lil bit at the end. Fairs in men. Voted: ViTRiOL / Mind Fuck
Posted on: 2012-12-28 20:04:25

Vitriol, some of your shit was clever, I'm really digging the funeral parlor line, shit was dope. The Calender / Armeggedon shit was played out & just kinda lame, the wording made the flow choppy also, but for the majority of the verse you had fresh concepts, good jabs & good wording. Mind Fuck, your opener was lame, imo. I did not like it at all, you got better as your verse progressed, but then ended kinda softly..... imo, the winner had better consistancy, & fresher concepts.. fv is in. Voted: ViTRiOL / Mind Fuck
Posted on: 2012-12-29 07:38:26

bet he watch me 'get the body- w/ no sweat' like LOW CALORIE DIETS// DAYMN Voted: ViTRiOL / Mind Fuck
Posted on: 2012-12-29 21:22:08

PUNCH game was more powerful then the Multi's Fv in Voted: ViTRiOL / Mind Fuck
Posted on: 2012-12-29 21:24:34

VIT- okay off the bat, im diggin the setups, first bar seemd like you switched ya scheme between bar tho.. cal in da , decent wordplay, comin up to arm a get on, another wordplay, although, when readin it in the second context as.' armaggedon the strap' doesnt read like a natural sentence imo.. i wouldve said my 'arm a get on yo ass' sayin your fire arm gon get on his ass.. which also would make sense in the second meaning.. 'armageddon yo ass' or i'd switch up the end word and say arm a get on his 'life'.. was feelin the job search... buildup.. toward the coffin.. also the followin scheme was smooth, wit the entombed in a closet set..the closer tho was a bit weak imo.. sea sick was probably the most played of your puns.. MIND- opening was quite nice, however, the dame and dash, came outta nowhere.. assumin it was a transitional to your next bar, shit is too long... when transitiionin, get to the multi earlier or toward the middle of your setup.. cause now it looks like a floatin line wit no setup ..next bar was some nice personal references, but worded choppy..and molten, molding is forced to me.. seems like you sayin d.i.e. got thrown in the fire and is meltin.. and dont use 'ock' that shit 99 percent of the time is basic filler in a scheme.. and its worse when used in a basic 3 syllable multi.. and again you threw in a floating line.. so his products soft? so what? wheres the buidup.. then it switches to buildin up about you bangin his sis? setup was hella long, too many words fucks up flow, and 'sperm is shot' is not even close as a simile to mobster boss.. your only reference was 'head off the family'.. in this instance its a wordling issue.. i wouldve said " my SPERM IS SHOT, from gettin 'head off the family' like a MOBSTER BOSS.. also the inner 'virgin twat' and 'sperm is shot' are spaced out too far from each other.. there should be only one or two words in between them for better flow... rest was weak, till the flinstones concept, vit a man, was okaish... alright what it comes down to is better setups and multi usage.. which strengthens the impact of their punch.. and my winner excelled here.. generous rates for hotlist Voted: ViTRiOL / Mind Fuck
Posted on: 2012-12-30 04:32:03

Neither impressed me here but my choice executed his concepts better in my opinion and had better wording other then that both were lacking in most aspects and on about the same level.. Overall this was an ok battle... Voted: ViTRiOL / Mind Fuck
Posted on: 2012-12-30 13:52:43

finally something worth being hotlisted. this shit came down to the smoothness and effectiveness of your lines... i disagree with korrupt since the 21st was supposed to be the worlds end the lines was very much relavent even though the idea has been used before... but other than that korrupt pretty much hit the nail in the coffin.. mind fuck you had some dope concepts and nice punches but your build up and multi sets before the actual punches threw it off for me.. but real shit it was a nice battle right here fellas... keep doin what yall doin. Voted: ViTRiOL / Mind Fuck
Posted on: 2012-12-30 16:05:34

Fairs in. Voted: ViTRiOL / Mind Fuck
Posted on: 2012-12-30 21:49:50

Fv Voted: ViTRiOL / Mind Fuck
Posted on: 2012-12-30 23:23:55

Gb But damn ViTRiOL that funeral parlor line was sick!! Voted: ViTRiOL / Mind Fuck
Posted on: 2012-12-31 04:27:22

I do have my winner. no hate to both. But one edged for me thanks to a line or too. Voted: ViTRiOL / Mind Fuck
Posted on: 2012-12-31 12:29:21