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Posted on: 2012-10-17 05:14:01

might make a buck Voted: Execute / Jay caution
Posted on: 2012-10-17 11:10:41

2RIP, don't cap things unless they rhyme and fit with your scheme. Jay caution, fill in the box. With that being said, one of you had the more coherent verse and gets my vote. Fairness. Voted: Execute / Jay caution
Posted on: 2012-10-19 03:38:06

my winner here utilized the boxes space more, and brought a bit better complexity schemewise, along wit some puns Voted: Execute / Jay caution
Posted on: 2012-10-20 05:30:41

Fv Voted: Execute / Jay caution
Posted on: 2012-10-20 07:17:42

loser - fill ur box and develop more complex ideas and harder punches. the winner, why r u capping stuff that u shudnt be? it affects the readability of the veres. it was a weak verse but slightly less weak than the oppenents Voted: Execute / Jay caution
Posted on: 2012-10-20 08:37:51

The winner here had the better rhymes scheme and the more complex verse as the other had a few punches thrown here and there but they really didn't land and weren't exactly hard hitting...more comical than anything. Fair is in Voted: Execute / Jay caution
Posted on: 2012-10-20 09:08:10