no hate and gl Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-10-07 19:46:41

i hadnt written for a battle in a long time and it took me about 10 min to write this and 2RIP if you want a better battle just let me know cuz im ready Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-10-09 14:40:01

both needs alot of work, ACID- you were tryin to add similes which is a good thing, no w you need to work on better setups and stronger endrhymes... 2rip - you are trying way to hard at making conplex, but forcing multis dont work fam... ex.. your first bar, the first multi when read makes sense in a formal language .. but then the match ;SLIP AND CLEAVE YA, CLIP YER GAME LATCHED. when i read that , it reads awkward.. how do you clip your game latched? doesnt make much sense.. so work on practicin wit lower syllable multis, start at 3 and gain proficiency, then wmrk on matchin ur multis, flinally add similes and metas... winner here had basic endrhymes but was a cleaner read imo Voted: SJBlazin / Execute
Posted on: 2012-10-09 23:46:39

fv Voted: SJBlazin / Execute
Posted on: 2012-10-10 00:43:53

Beyond terrible Voted: SJBlazin / Execute
Posted on: 2012-10-10 02:23:43

ok, little to no punches, multis were off, ideas were overly basic and terrible wording - and that goes to both guys. my winner just made more of an attempt to land some punches. Voted: SJBlazin / Execute
Posted on: 2012-10-10 06:49:01

Fair dropped. Went with the dude I felt was easier to read since there was really nothing else to go off. Both were pretty bad though. Voted: SJBlazin / Execute
Posted on: 2012-10-11 07:56:39