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Posted on: 2012-10-01 23:09:40

fv is in...VOTE BACK!! Voted: W33Dman / WaDe JaYare
Posted on: 2012-10-02 00:26:24

Good verses, winner is getting my vote because I liked some of his word play a little better and his lines resonated with me more. Close one. Voted: W33Dman / WaDe JaYare
Posted on: 2012-10-02 00:37:15

Good battle both had good line but one had a smoother flow and was a easier read for me.. FV VB Voted: W33Dman / WaDe JaYare
Posted on: 2012-10-02 07:24:57

FUCK AN EXPO, DON'T VOTE IF UR MIND CAN'T COMPREHEND Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-10-02 11:42:07

My choice could have been a little more complex with his set-ups and execution also his set-ups could have been a little more relevant to his punches in some spots.. His concepts were ok along with his flow... His opponent was lacking them same but seem to be even less complex with his bars... Hes got the right idea but needs to start wording things correctly and showing more complexity.. Voted: W33Dman / WaDe JaYare
Posted on: 2012-10-02 12:07:07

W33Dman i was slightly surprised at a couple of lines here and there... there weren't any that really hit but i can see a couple punches that if worded better could've hit a little harder... i suggest you work on formulating some more creative punches and clean up your rhyme scheme and multies... they seem to be a little choppy due to you not having any build up to the punch... and without the build up you can't make the punch hit as hard as it should... keep elevating homie... WaDe JaYare i felt you tried a little too hard with attempts at a punch... alot of your shit was hard to understand so i did research on what you said and it still didn't hit at all... for you i think your best bet is to keep it a little bit simpler... i can tell when you're writting your verse you think of the rhyme first then try to keep rhyming it... that's a dangerous way to play homie! you gotta think about the concept first and form the rhymes around it... all n all... one was more consistent and an easier read... fair is dropped... Voted: W33Dman / WaDe JaYare
Posted on: 2012-10-02 12:07:17

I'm a newcomer so all that advice I'm gonna take in and keep workin on my shit and I do appreciate all the input. Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-10-02 12:14:11

my winner had some nice concepts but had some wording issues, if u executed them better u wud actually have some pretty fire lines, couple places it seemed forced too. the loser was overly simple and didnt really bring much to the table in terms of concepts or punches. Voted: W33Dman / WaDe JaYare
Posted on: 2012-10-02 16:00:01

Better rhythms and flow from W33 imo. Voted: W33Dman / WaDe JaYare
Posted on: 2012-10-02 16:27:58

First emcee had his moments but there were a few multies which did not rhyme and a few of them were broken multies. My suggestion would be to take a certain concept and build on it yo. For example, the dragon flies line. You could have stuck with that concept for a while and started talking about fire flies or butterflies or just insects in general and formed a strong setup leading to a hard hitting punch. WaDe: There was a line in there that really didn't make sense but I see where you was going with it. You stepped in this heat like John Cena's Sling? A sling as far, as I know, does not have any feet at all. Also, how can you have juice and not have juice at the same time? Just a few irrelevant lines took away from a solid rate. As I told W33Dman, you need to take a concept and build on it, I see you build on the SADAM line and finished with the bomb needs a ring line but you should build off it a little more, maybe a few more bars and also, work on ya placement of bars. You should have placed the Sting line up there with the John Cena line...would've hit harder imo. The winner I feel had the stronger setups and smoother flow to be completely honest. Respect to both emcees for putting bars on display but only one can win. Fair Vote In Voted: W33Dman / WaDe JaYare
Posted on: 2012-10-02 18:21:10

Fair Vote Is In . Take The Criticism From the Dudes Above yall Hope To See You Guys Elevate . Voted: W33Dman / WaDe JaYare
Posted on: 2012-10-03 16:18:52