good luck Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-09-09 07:29:36

you to bro Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-09-10 10:36:46

One's multis were all over the place like shit hitting a fan...the other has a lot of room for improvement (you both do) but had more of an attacking approach and better readability to his verse. Fairs in, Fuels out... #AllElseObsolete. Voted: neverexpendable / Endoplazmik
Posted on: 2012-09-10 16:35:31

I sent both of you tip lists... Both need to make sure every mutlie is capitalized and be providing us with with at least 3 syllable multies but go for 4 or 5... Also both need to work on set-ups and concepts cuz neither were fresh in either department... Try to be on attack mode in every line and word your metaphors wisely... And when i say attack mode i mean do less talking about yourself and more talking about your opponent but yall need set-ups to help pack a strong punch... Anyways read my tip list thats in your inbox and put all of those tips in to your next text battle, well with the exception of wordplay cuz yall should focus more on the basics 1st... Voted: neverexpendable / Endoplazmik
Posted on: 2012-09-10 17:24:18