En beat me to the punch, GB one did better in my Opinion. Voted: Ilovehoochies / ENGINEER
Posted on: 2012-08-25 22:30:10

EN:don't just focus for multies,Try to hit with punches trust me it will be dope.clear win though,no hate...! Voted: Ilovehoochies / ENGINEER
Posted on: 2012-08-25 22:48:49

TNX 4 the advice bruh Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-08-25 23:01:46

Gb Enginneer Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-08-25 23:15:22

gs fv swag vs lyricz Voted: Ilovehoochies / ENGINEER
Posted on: 2012-08-25 23:16:30

damn i knew it. Voted: Ilovehoochies / ENGINEER
Posted on: 2012-08-26 00:08:38

Yup Voted: Ilovehoochies / ENGINEER
Posted on: 2012-08-26 01:20:49

Hoochies got tha type killa nigga flow, i fuks w/ it... But im a strong believer tha Punches win battles, always have...Always will & Tha lil engine that cud.... well he punched alotta filler, but still landed a solid pun. This wasn a battle more so a independent display in strength of skills, That being said...This is Tha Hoodz Vote. Voted: Ilovehoochies / ENGINEER
Posted on: 2012-08-26 03:59:58

Its more of Self hype vs Technikal lyricism Fairs in Gb Voted: Ilovehoochies / ENGINEER
Posted on: 2012-08-26 06:15:46

Ilovehoochies....Hig h As Usual and Riding By on Cruise Control || Ready To Bruise You Slow, Confuse You Until You Loose your Flow, and then Abuse You with Blows || First Of All Your Wording Needs To Be Worked On ''Confuse You Until You Lose Your Flow'' Doesn't Exactly Make Sense, You Have A Reasonable Idea Of The Usage Of Multis But You Broke Syllabel Count With Abuse You With Blows. Also This Bar Had No Punch What So Ever Overall 2/10 My rhyme just grows || I'm Adjusting to Time as its Disposed || Being in my Prime makes me Compose || Once My Show is Exposed || Every One Knows and will Come to realization of me being Pro || One Word Rhymes Is Not A Good Way To Tell The Letbeef People You're Skilled, Your Lines Have No Structure And The Execution Is Terrible. You Need To Develop Yourself A Structure And Style With Each Bar Having A Punch That's Clever And Makes The Voters Say Whoa 2/10 Able to Steal Your Nation Underneath Your Nose || It's my Obligation to plunder this Earth with no Soul || Always Like Staying in Control || This Is the End of My Role Because more blunts need to be Rolled, I need to Pack more Bowls, wait for a cat to oppose, Which makes this Rap Battle Closed. Ahhh I See What You Tried, Noobish Mistake. You Taught It Would Be Better To Use One Word Rhymes For Half Your Verse Because It Looks Better Than Having Long Multis But Switching Scheme Each Bar. Again You Failed To Deliver A Punch 2-10 Overa ll You Need Tons Of Work. I Recommend You Cap Your Multis Too You Should Ask A Vet Or Two To Help You Understand Text Battling More. Keep Grinding You Can Get Better If You Stick At It. Practice Makes Perfect. Overall 2-10 Voted: Ilovehoochies / ENGINEER
Posted on: 2012-08-26 13:18:18

"gassed up" but about to get HIT BY AN AIR "RAID" SPIT FIRE AN WAIT for his comeback he shoulda hungback for another cat but ITS DIRE AN LATE At Least You Cap Your ''Multis'' You Have To Keep Syllabel Bro Other Wise The Flow Is Choppy You Also Had No Punchline Here And The Attempt At Wordplay Was Meh. 3-10 im SPITTIN LIQUID quickly FINISH THIS SHIT 8 lines aint enough for what ima DO TO THIS BOY u couldnt "orchestrate a great battle" if he was the "composer" writin the "MUSIC TO TROY" I Can't Even Figure Out Where To Separate Your Bars Due To The Fact You Have No Structure To You Bars. The Punch Here Wasn't So Bad But Still Weak Compared To Other Cats. 4/10 watch me SPRAY THA BITCH c'mon SAY SOME SHIT about how ima need to BOTTLE MY AGRESSION UP ill hit the THROTTLE AN WRECK YA PUNCH leave ya "speechless" like ya "GLOTTAL IS MESSIN UP" Your Understanding Of Battling Is Not Bad You Just Need Some Practice To Be Honest. You Have Potential But Right Now You're Not Strong At All. Too Choppy And Too Sloppy. This Bar Here Was Also Iffy The Multis Were Off Syllabel Yet Again And The Punch Was Weak 3/10 "DISARM" THIS HERB like im lyrically "DISCONNECTIN YA SHOULDERS" hands of fire" so my HITS CONNECT AND THEY "SMOULDER" Weak Sauce, Attempt On Wordplay Was Aweful And The Punch Was Terrible. Poor Bar And Poor Closer 2/10 Overall Your Verse Was All Right In Places But Terrible In Others, You Need To Keep Your Multi Syllabel Count The Same And Quit Trying To Use Wordplay Because Only Experianced And Knowledgable Emcees Can Pull It Off. 3/10 Voted: Ilovehoochies / ENGINEER
Posted on: 2012-08-26 13:18:50

OVERALL This Was A Well Below Par Battle, Both Emcees Need A Lot Of Work And Need To Ask A Few Vets For Help In My Opinion. Learning From Others Is Always Easier Than Learning By Yourself. One Just Happened To Have A Better Understanding Of Battling Here And Barely Edges It. Fair Is In Voted: Ilovehoochies / ENGINEER
Posted on: 2012-08-26 13:19:25

Thanks for the feedback critics...Its just hard to dis someone in text battles when your not face to face you know, that's why I was focusing on myself. Any advice? Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-08-29 13:17:56