Some Classick ish here... Im feelin ones elevation, Shoot me some bars wen u feelin up to it big doggy. But tha battle wasnt close, i enjoyed tha read tho. Blaze 1 Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-08-13 13:56:01

young smokes : Your opener lacked creative set-ups and execution.. The concept were juvenile so try finding a topic to spit about that other people dont but make sure it makes sense... Also your vocab seems to be young also so try reading books or even read a dictionary.. I did.. You also need to cap your multies and be sure that them multies are anywhere from 3-7 syllables long... I'll send you a tip list of mine right now.. tbh throughout your entire verse you lacked in all aspects i spoke of earlier so take a look at that tip list and use it...............Ill uminate : Your opener was cool... The concept wasn't to creative but your wording and flow were nice.. Your set-ups could be a little more complex tbh... Your next bars (prolly good sigh,hollywood sign) was decent but the hollywood line would have been stronger if his name was hollywood but the line was still good... Your concepts were good though.. The set-up was nice along with your execution and your flow is still on point.. Your closer was pretty good... The concepts were decent but they've been done before but your wording and flow made them seem somewhat fresh... Your set-ups were decent and your execution was cool... Your multies could of had more syllables but it was still good... Votes based off of consistency... Voted: young smokes /
Posted on: 2012-08-13 14:39:32

imma drop my vote on this later, but i just picked up on 1 thing "you can copy GAY-Z and make your fingers a pyramid" is a line from a lowkey track - a chipmunk diss Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-08-14 11:15:56

this battle wasnt too good in my opinion , one was just off atleast he rhymed i guess might of had a message but wasnt really a battling drop the other had some okay lines no real punches thats was stand out mis worded bars that couldve went over much better honestly ... pm me and i can help you on elevation or yall should just think of some dope concepts and add heavier punches in the mix of things fair vote is in Voted: young smokes /
Posted on: 2012-08-15 02:42:59

gb Voted: young smokes /
Posted on: 2012-08-16 16:41:35

i started laughin when i read GOD ON MY SIDE... and then FUCK in the same sentence! Ill was nice. i liked illuminate bars Voted: young smokes /
Posted on: 2012-08-16 17:09:18