~MonStruMental~ vs ILLoKWENT - Text Rap Battle - Battle Rap and Rap Battles at LetsBeef.com


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~MonStruMental~ (21%)

Basic Member

Ranked #-- This Season

Reppin: San Antonio, Texas, United States

ILLoKWENT is on FIRE! 30+ wins in a row!

ILLoKWENT (79%) WINNER

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Ranked #-- This Season

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~MonStruMental~

Bitch best belive you aint wanna seeme in my ZONE fuckaround and find me in the back of ya HOME!with a book bag,warpaint,vest's and AMMO,ak over my shoulder two berrats im RAMBO!!you make me sick you son of a BITCH,it'll hurt ya mom knowin that her son is a BITCH!! funeral to make ya mommy HURT,got that tommy to make ya body JERK!!you bitch you NOT HOT your like a sneaker so you hate cause ima get put on first like SOCKS!!bitch you overhyped like a advertisment PROMO!!i got ya girls legs open like the fuckin jordan LOGO!!thats it get this bitchs body a HEIRSE!!/when its all do ill probally hear all of my shit in ya VERSE!!...

ILLoKWENT

nigga, i got a WEALTH OF NINES AND SHELLS, that'll turn ya body to 'ribbons' ,like the  NECK OF  MICHAEL PHELPS/send ya to DEATH IN TIME FOR HELL, and have the DEVIL TOUCH HIS SLAVE, cause my 'smiths is deadly', aint no '50's chevy's'  the way my  METAL BUMP YER  FRAME/metal bumper.. i got STEALTH AND SUCH TO MAIM,  similar to NINJAS AND B2'S. yep my FINGAHS CAN SQUEEZE TOOLS, to 'stage more drama' than SPRINGER HAD TEENS DO/ BRING YA TO MEET PROOF, and not EMINEM PAYIN RESPECTS, cause i'll put you in the 'air' wit 'force ,one time'  like the PRESIDENTS PLANE HE LEAVES IN/

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Battle started: August 3^rd 2012 at 03:56
Challenger joined: August 3^rd 2012 at 04:24

Voting has ended for this battle (battle finished on 2012-08-03 04:24:37).

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~MonStruMental~ Basic Member	when its all done ill probaly hear all of my shit in ya verse Comment Only Posted on: 2012-08-03 03:59:45
skillop Basic Member	nice verse monstruMental Comment Only Posted on: 2012-08-03 03:59:48
~MonStruMental~ Basic Member	thanks man i appreciate that. Comment Only Posted on: 2012-08-03 04:02:10
Yokilla Grizzly Basic Member	gb Voted: ~MonStruMental~ / ILLoKWENT Posted on: 2012-08-03 04:38:14
TwiztedLyracist Basic Member	gb Voted: ~MonStruMental~ / ILLoKWENT Posted on: 2012-08-03 09:53:07
Rippon Basic Member	Fair... Voted: ~MonStruMental~ / ILLoKWENT Posted on: 2012-08-03 10:34:24
RAPfORever Basic Member	close one edged it gb. fv. Voted: ~MonStruMental~ / ILLoKWENT Posted on: 2012-08-03 11:03:23
D Ess Basic Member	lol @ monstrumental taking Reed Dollaz line Comment Only Posted on: 2012-08-03 20:34:53
miraclelyrical Basic Member	fv Voted: ~MonStruMental~ / ILLoKWENT Posted on: 2012-08-03 22:19:24
Dinosaur_Swag Basic Member	GB. respect too both. Voted: ~MonStruMental~ / ILLoKWENT Posted on: 2012-08-04 14:11:29
NOBLE <FITTEST> Premium Member	~MonStruMental~-You had a nice flow, but there was hardly any wordplay, metaphors or other devices that add complexity. If you don't know what those are, feel free to hit me up and I'll be glad to explain them. Also, you used mostly one-syllable rhymes and I felt that your flow would have been far more appealing if you had rhymed more syllables. Try making it a point not to rhyme anything less than two syllables like when you rhymed PROMO with LOGO...then you can develop from there. ILLoKWENT™ -You had some pretty nice metaphors in there. The opener was nice. I kinda felt it clashed with the structure a little bit though. Nice touch with the internal rhymes. I'd say the strongest parts of your verse were the metaphors. If your wordplay game was as strong, you'd be a heavyweight prospect. The multies were nice, but they were a little unclean in certain parts--like the last set EMINEM PAYING RESPECTS/ PRESIDENT PLANE HE LEAVES IN. Overall-I felt one dominated in all categories in this match. Thanks for the nice read fellas. Voted: ~MonStruMental~ / ILLoKWENT Posted on: 2012-08-04 14:43:41
Letum	ACish Comment Only Posted on: 2012-08-04 15:05:55
OfficialB10 Basic Member	close battle. one edged it with the better wordplay and mulites. one had the better punchlines. good battle guys Voted: ~MonStruMental~ / ILLoKWENT Posted on: 2012-08-04 18:24:31
3V1L <AK's>	Kinda one sided...but both solid drops. Monstrumental....kee p grindin homie Voted: ~MonStruMental~ / ILLoKWENT Posted on: 2012-08-04 22:48:15
GRizzEAT <CHALKLINED> King Of LetsBeef Scheme Champion	One was jus out-classed. Tha Hoodz Vote Voted: ~MonStruMental~ / ILLoKWENT Posted on: 2012-08-05 10:13:10
disection Basic Member	fv Voted: ~MonStruMental~ / ILLoKWENT Posted on: 2012-08-05 22:50:57


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