shhot had 2 meanings: shoot as in violence and shoot as in photo shoot magazines had 2 meanings also: magazine as in the gun's load, and magazine as in a reader's entertainment...good luck Path Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-07-31 13:12:14

This was a good battle That psycho PATH ic line was nice! I also enjoyed the Open ya window without double clicking a mouse! i had to read this battle 3 times to try to judge and vote fair Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-08-15 17:05:14

NaturallyMade : Your opener (Valid like salad/asthmatic) wasn't strong.. Your multies had mismatched syllables and the concepts weren't to good... Also your wording could have been better... Your next bar (you not to play with static/psychopathic) still had mismatched multies and didn't really rhyme in some spots to begin with... The nameplay was decent but didn't hit hard cuz there was nothing to it... If your set-up and execution was more complex then it would have hit hard... Your next bar (magazines are finished/actually in it) didn't hit hard... The magazine concept is played and your wording didn't help... Your next line was basically filler in my eyes cuz there was noting to it... Your closer also had nothing to it.. There was no complexity or set-ups and your execution didn't hit hard either... You need to work on the syllable count of your multies and also concepts and your wording............. Path : Your opener was cool but i felt it could have been worded better but the concepts were nice and your set-ups and execution was strong.. Your next bar (trouble picking a blouse/double clicking the mouse) had nice concepts and your mouse line had a nice set-up to it but didn't really hit that hard for some reason.. Your closer was nice... The concepts were good along with set-ups and execution and wording... Overall this was a decent battle... Votes based off of consistency... Voted: NaturallyMade / Anarchist
Posted on: 2012-08-15 18:31:18

NM: felt you was on the basic side of the fence no stand out punches/wordplay or concepts just rhymed and your multi's wasnt really on note either . just worry about the punches and flow make everything piece together set up each line and make it happen and practice on cus it seems like theres room for elevation as long as you know which direction to take as a textcee... Path : the "robin hood bow talks" line was nice couldve been worded differently for greater execution but still enjoyable . cool punches followed with the double click but nothing too major . and closer was cool i felt you starting going down after the beginning you always want you openers and closers to be flawless and everything to follow up in between . but fair votes in NO HATE Voted: NaturallyMade / Anarchist
Posted on: 2012-08-16 04:57:26

tha iz path. Voted: NaturallyMade / Anarchist
Posted on: 2012-08-16 16:34:11

NAT- ok , first off, just by reading the cappd words, i noticed alot of mismatched multis, which leads me to conclude that your inexperienced wit that particular element, multis need to first off have the same number of words, your first cappd amount was 5, then 6.. then down to 3.. you need to stay consistent, and even if you drop 3 syllable multis, keep it thruout your verse... next is you lack of strong similes, metaphors..you tried to integrate some basic wordplay, wit magazines, etc. but it lacked cleverness, and was pretty straight forward, meaning wise.. try to come up wit different angles to the simile..that are more unpredictable. i did like the fact you threw in a name play wit psycho path. but the way it was worded made it seem more as hypin up your opponent then belittling him.., rest of your verse was pretty much the same, basic, disses, coupled wit multis that match syllable wise, but rhyme wise felt forced.. ya need to practice learning what words to rhyme correctly in your multi set , it helps wit flow. PATH-openin g wasnt feeling the 'pointing fire' because it was a bad relation wit the mohaks are hot...felt forced imo, and leading up to the botox, it felt out of place, wit the buildup, your sayin 'fuck bein natural', what do you mean by that? and you mentioned robbin hoods which relates to the bow reference, but in context doesnt relate well as a whole bar..next you tried throwin a jab in the setup, which was ok,concept window punch was okish, rest of your verse was ok, anyway, winner for me came wit a more polished rhyme scheme, and slightly more defined concept /flips... fairs in.. Voted: NaturallyMade / Anarchist
Posted on: 2012-08-17 02:11:05

Brah ur puns are like warheads w/o missiles attached to them, Figga that out n u'll do damage @Path///Nat..I dont fuk w/ wayne in a battle sense.. and thats really all im seein from ur persona. no real substance in those bars...hellie swag and played bars really...Tha Hoodz Vote Voted: NaturallyMade / Anarchist
Posted on: 2012-08-17 08:38:00

The way I'm looking at it, both battlers have skills. One just has strong usage of wordplay in the form of nameplay, a strong flow that doesn't get caught up in the multies, and punchlines that actually land pretty hard. It's refreshing. I'm assuming that both have some history here, or in text battling at the very least. The Magazine/shoot play was pretty nice and I don't really feel it warranted more explanation, but I have seen some of the voting around here so I understand. Whate ver the case, one of the more pleasant reads I've had since I've gotten here. Good battle guys. I'm looking forward to seeing more or crossing words. BTW: BOB= Bow Talks =P. Good shit. Voted: NaturallyMade / Anarchist
Posted on: 2012-08-17 23:58:20