one got it with punchlines and consistent flow. gb fv Voted: FaceJacker / kuniiii1
Posted on: 2012-07-27 22:18:01

FaceJacker : Your overall drop showed lack of creativity and thought out lines seems as if you just was bored and put anything down (no disrespect) But you need to work on your craft from start review line for line add some punches and have some nicely schemed set ups to help land the punches your try to create I will having no problem helping you step by step with that if you pm me ... Kuniii1 : Ok now you seem to have a Idea of Multi's but you're not landing with any dope punches seems like you just stuck to the rhyme factor nothing was helping the build I feel you should do line for line set ups and not put quotations around everything that rhymes instead put them around anything you think people need to notice such and concept phrases & wordplay I can give you a much better walkthrough of what I mean also .. Fair vote is in no Hate just all Honestly Voted: FaceJacker / kuniiii1
Posted on: 2012-07-30 00:31:45

Kuniiii killed it once again. FV. Vote back Voted: FaceJacker / kuniiii1
Posted on: 2012-07-30 21:48:02