Jae Thugga vs ~SHINIGAMI~ - Text Rap Battle - Battle Rap and Rap Battles at LetsBeef.com


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Length: 8 Lines

Jae Thugga (7%)

Basic Member

Ranked #-- This Season

Reppin: Richmond, Virginia, United States

~SHINIGAMI~ (93%) WINNER

Ranked #-- This Season

Crew: Multiville Horror

Reppin: Puerto Rico

Jae Thugga

homie u couldnt spit a hard flow if u took viagra, imma boss like ross wit alotta swagger...i got bad bitches from va to the jersey shore,i fucked yours,and she gave me brain til i cremed on her face like a fucking smore...think Im lying ill pinky swear,you cant rap or fight, get ya eyes blacked like a polar bear...beat yo ass like its fight nite nigga,like kevin hart go nite nite nigga...loud pack is wat im smoking in my swisher, imma balla like kobe, and you a trader like fisher...big blunts mane i stay high, racks in my pocket and u barley getting by....

~SHINIGAMI~

Ay I Really Can't 'STAND THIS SQUARE' So I'm Bout To Dot Both His Eyes Like A 'PANDA BEAR!' For The 'BREAD I'M LIKE MIKE VICK' I'll Throw Bullets To Split Cha 'HEAD WHEN I SNIPE THIS', Consider The Bitch 'DEAD WIT THEM HYPE SPITZ' Cuz I'll Leave Ya "ASSED OUT" Wit A Grin Like You're 'MOONING IN CARS' Even If You Were The 'MASS STOUT' Of The Gym U Ain't 'MOVING THESE BARS!' You'll Catch Shots Like 'PAPARAZZI EYELIDS" N Get Put In The Air To Die Like 'KAMIKAZE PILOTS!' Now I Ain't Tryna Push Buttons Or 'RAVEL HOES' But Try Me n Get Bodied when I Leave Ya "ROCKED" like 'GRAVEL ROADS!'

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Battle started: June 24^th 2012 at 18:34
Challenger joined: June 24^th 2012 at 19:37

Voting has ended for this battle (battle finished on 2012-06-24 19:37:43).

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U NiQue NeSs <FYF> Exclusive Member	One was better...fvs in no hatee aid.. Voted: Jae Thugga / ~SHINIGAMI~ Posted on: 2012-06-24 19:41:30
-Slander- <Agent>	i think both came correct, but I think that polar bear line was supposed to be panda bear... and to see that flip in the next verse clinched it for me. shows that it was truly a freestyle too, not a pre writ. both got a nice flow and decent punches... I have seen better from both, but all in all a decent battle. no hate fellas... fairs in. Voted: Jae Thugga / ~SHINIGAMI~ Posted on: 2012-06-24 19:56:13
Apollyon	QUICK FULL BREAKDOWN... JAE THUGGA : 1st of all, you need to cap your multies to make this an easier read and 2nd You need to completely fill in your box... Your opener had many flaws such as your multies... They weren't too good so try making them sound more alike like how your opponent did... And also try using set-ups to help land a decent punch... Your concepts were very basic and also played... Your wording can be a bit better to... To be honest your verse needs work so heres some tips that I've already said but I'll say again... You need to find good concepts and you can do that by watching tv/movies, reading or researching shit on the web or even read a dictionary.. I use to read the dictionary lol... Anyways you also need set-ups to help make a strong punch or else your basically flowing which lacks complexity and everyone likes complexity... Also your wording needs to be a bit better and your vocab needs to expand......... ~SHINIGAMI~ : Your opener was rather basic but you had a nice concept just didn't set it up or execute as strong as you could of due to the lack of good wording... Your next couple lines were basically filler... Your 'mooning in cars' line could have been a lot stronger if your wording was done with more complexity... The 'moving these bars' line was rather weak not to good of a concept to begin with so that line really didn't have hope of hitting hard... The 'kamikaze pilots' bar was cool but could of had more to it... Your closer was cool but your set-up could have been stronger but it was still decent.... Votes based off of consistency.... Voted: Jae Thugga / ~SHINIGAMI~ Posted on: 2012-06-24 21:03:29
Golden Armz Banned	fv Voted: Jae Thugga / ~SHINIGAMI~ Posted on: 2012-06-24 21:14:46
Adubs KiloG Basic Member	Shin with that fire! Gb by both. Flips took it for me Voted: Jae Thugga / ~SHINIGAMI~ Posted on: 2012-06-24 21:19:10
Letum	one took it ezzzzzz Voted: Jae Thugga / ~SHINIGAMI~ Posted on: 2012-06-24 23:16:04
Jae Thugga Basic Member	thanks phenonon Comment Only Posted on: 2012-06-25 01:01:14
DeftnessTemper Exclusive Member	fv Voted: Jae Thugga / ~SHINIGAMI~ Posted on: 2012-06-25 04:08:52
Killer Cole	wont go into detail, fv. Voted: Jae Thugga / ~SHINIGAMI~ Posted on: 2012-06-25 04:10:14
《11:11》 <GetRight> Exclusive Member	one waz outmatched..if either need an expo inbox me!! FV Iz in Please Return A FV Back!!! Respect.. Voted: Jae Thugga / ~SHINIGAMI~ Posted on: 2012-06-25 04:48:08
Tony The TYGER Live Battler	nice Voted: Jae Thugga / ~SHINIGAMI~ Posted on: 2012-06-25 07:47:36
lilshay Basic Member	close battle Voted: Jae Thugga / ~SHINIGAMI~ Posted on: 2012-06-26 16:07:41
Celsius <LoD> Heavyweight Champion Scheme Champion	that'll do. Voted: Jae Thugga / ~SHINIGAMI~ Posted on: 2012-06-26 19:03:08
H0ax Basic Member	Nice battle! Voted: Jae Thugga / ~SHINIGAMI~ Posted on: 2012-06-26 22:26:12
Snoopy316 <GodOfLyric>	both got nice flo, Jae ur punchlines are smooth, but try to cap it next time. Shinigami got stronger concept and complexity. fair vote no hate. vote back guys. Voted: Jae Thugga / ~SHINIGAMI~ Posted on: 2012-06-26 23:07:18
kuniiii1 <SENATE>	One Had More Hits Which Produce Greater Amount Of Damage In The Battle..Fairs In.. Voted: Jae Thugga / ~SHINIGAMI~ Posted on: 2012-06-26 23:33:43
C-NO Slim Basic Member	FV Voted: Jae Thugga / ~SHINIGAMI~ Posted on: 2012-06-26 23:38:08
Rhifle	ONE CAME WITH THE HARDER PUNCHES AND SMOOTHER FLOW IMO. FAIR IS IN!! Voted: Jae Thugga / ~SHINIGAMI~ Posted on: 2012-06-26 23:52:55
♕♡-B€††Ÿ~RÛGÈ®-♥♛ <TRDZ> Basic Member	good battle fv dropped no hate vote back Voted: Jae Thugga / ~SHINIGAMI~ Posted on: 2012-06-27 01:04:08
Biggie Millz <TRDZ> Basic Member	Shinigami was HOT Voted: Jae Thugga / ~SHINIGAMI~ Posted on: 2012-06-27 13:08:08
True Zeus Basic Member	both were good, one hit harder for me. Voted: Jae Thugga / ~SHINIGAMI~ Posted on: 2012-06-27 16:11:08
stricc <LoD> Hall Of Famer 2x Video Battle Champion Grand Champion Live Battler	jae need more complex syllable punches in his verse fv no hate Voted: Jae Thugga / ~SHINIGAMI~ Posted on: 2012-06-27 16:15:12
stricc <LoD> Hall Of Famer 2x Video Battle Champion Grand Champion Live Battler	phenomenon talk like he's a GOT DAMN BEAST or something. for every great accomplishment there is a critic. save us tha speeches morgan freeman Voted: Jae Thugga / ~SHINIGAMI~ Posted on: 2012-06-27 16:17:53
droppin bars Basic Member	close battle fureal both had good punchlines and multies but one had a little bit better punchlines for me, vair vote, vote back plz Voted: Jae Thugga / ~SHINIGAMI~ Posted on: 2012-06-27 18:30:16
THUGGED ON HIM Banned	winner had good punches and concepts.Dope multies and rhyme schemes. Voted: Jae Thugga / ~SHINIGAMI~ Posted on: 2012-06-27 19:00:53
2FlareS Basic Member	Both Pretty Good Voted: Jae Thugga / ~SHINIGAMI~ Posted on: 2012-06-27 19:48:27


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