EXPO : my wordplay is enter resting/interesting and in/end zone... Brinks make safes and also to open up a a safe you have to turn the knob right then left then right again... on a busy day at a psychiatric hospital there would be a line of crazy people... EZ Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-06-21 07:45:03

this was a decent battle i seen one got alot better since last time i read and honestly to me i jus perferred ones wordplay and punches over his opponents but good shit from both.....respect Voted: Apollyon / -Z0NE-
Posted on: 2012-06-24 12:44:00

phenomon's verse: his RAPPING DOUBTS GOT'EM GORED N BURIED now this 'weirdo'll permanently enter resting' for "always ACTING OUT OF THE ORDINARY ^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^good wordplay here, havent seen someone try to flip interesting... i wouldve said 'weirdo's' instead of weirdo'll..sounds awkward reading it out.. " when i bust rounds fag I'll 'send them bullets in zone' like a "touchdown pass" this is your ABOMINATION TWAT hes on the 'brinks of safe?' nah im hitting'em with a 'right, left, right' to leave'em 'opened up' like a "COMBINATION LOCk ^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^good zone nameflip, but then you went a different route,abomination twat, seemed fillerish just to have a multi match combination lock.. end punch was aight.. " i got'em 'praying for forgiveness' but the "REVEREND VANISHED" so i bet this buster drops when he receives 'another shot' like "SECOND CHANCES ^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^a bit simpler lookin bar, punch was straight forward...decent " 'mentally he thinks hes ill' LIKE HES PASSING OBSTACLES but he cant show us a 'crazy line on a busy day' at a "PSYCHIATRIC HOSPITAL" ^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^t his bar wouldve went well wit your first bar... Voted: Apollyon / -Z0NE-
Posted on: 2012-06-24 21:58:55

Send TORPEDOES towards TOLEDO, wrap ya town up like BURRITOS/ ^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^wasnt feelin this punch, fairly basic imo & only time you SEE 'DOE' is through 'BUCK EYES', you the type to Daffy DUCK GUYS, with bars colder than CANUCK ICE/ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^decent metas here , but felt a bit basic see how I spit DRAMATICALLY? thats why I end your career so TRAGICALLY, you could say Zone attacks SPORADICALLY, always on the move. I'm NOMADIC SEE? not the type to pull AUTOMATIC HEAT, but I'll light your ass up like stars in the GALAXY, and to RAPIDLY fill yo FANTASY with AGONY is the STRATEGY!/ like Newton with the GRAVITY cuz this nigga is APPLE SWEET! so fuck it I'll tha take the 'key to madness' HAPPILY!!! ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^these bars took your vere down a notch, multis were fillerish, no real setups, and the similes were basic... imo... for me the winner, just had better concepts , wordplay, and consistent complexity in schemes... loser started off ok, then fell off in the end imo.. fairs in Voted: Apollyon / -Z0NE-
Posted on: 2012-06-24 22:15:32

nice battle Voted: Apollyon / -Z0NE-
Posted on: 2012-06-26 13:20:12

simple and to the point. Voted: Apollyon / -Z0NE-
Posted on: 2012-06-26 13:25:51

Both nice but Zone went in. Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-06-26 14:27:27

Both have a lot of potential, one was slightly on another level though, the fair's in. Voted: Apollyon / -Z0NE-
Posted on: 2012-06-26 17:21:33

POLO - lol ;) Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-06-26 18:13:37

that'll do Voted: Apollyon / -Z0NE-
Posted on: 2012-06-26 19:01:40

phenomonon, you definitely got potential. my favorite line was the nameplay passing bullets/endzone line. i felt some of your metaphors were a little simplistic, but it was great that you at least had them there to embellish your punches. zone, i felt like you were more focused on using multis...you had them coming frequently and whatnot, but I didn't really feel like you created any real impactful jabs with them though. you should try setting up your lines better, meaning you should link the concepts of your major punch to the minor ones preceding it. just my 2 pennies. overall, i felt one had the more developed verse here. fairness Voted: Apollyon / -Z0NE-
Posted on: 2012-06-26 19:46:19