AsianPersausion vs ~SHINIGAMI~ - Text Rap Battle - Battle Rap and Rap Battles at LetsBeef.com

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AsianPersausion (0%)

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Reppin: Seven Valleys, Pennsylvania, United States

~SHINIGAMI~ (100%) WINNER

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AsianPersausion

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Listen I've already won, so why should you even try you're already done. I dont feel like wasting time on you because there's better challengers than you, so I have something to tell you here's a clue. It involves you sucking something and that something belongs to me, now hold up I got to go pee. I'm back and I'm ready to attack. Wheres your defense, are my words to intense? I hope your done rapping, so the audience can start clapping. Have fun being the loser, because I'm the abuser. I'm very lyrically talented, so talented my lyrics have been patented.

~SHINIGAMI~

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This ‘DUDE IS SAD’ if that’s what ‘YOU CALL BAD?‘ pfft… Then you never stood a chance like the ‘UTAH JAZZ!‘ Kid I kinda ‘QUESTION YA FATE’ cuz even when you know how I’m ‘WRECKIN’ WIT EIGHTS’ you still got the nerves to be ‘TESTIN’ THIS GREAT’ well…that’s like being blind-folded walkin’ into a cage n‘ ‘WRESTLIN’AN APE!’ You’re sure to ‘DIE ON SIGHT’ even with the strength being ‘HIGH ON WHITE’ cuz imitating “Jimmie Walker” is the only time we hear anything from him that’s ‘DYNAMITE!’ I just laugh at the idea of thinking’ this ‘HOE’S TOUGH’ cuz I see him blowing more kisses in wigs like he portraying he’s ‘GOLD DUST’  ~ZIP HIM UP!~

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Battle started: June 19^th 2012 at 16:44
Challenger joined: June 19^th 2012 at 16:54

Voting has ended for this battle (battle finished on 2012-06-19 16:54:21).

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Letum	lol - POLO Comment Only Posted on: 2012-06-19 17:10:16
Manhattan <LoD> Grand Champion Concept Champion Tag Team Champion	PoLo! Throw Hoes! Comment Only Posted on: 2012-06-19 17:20:46
Ill Phenom	Asian: First off your opening lines besides the very first one.. you used "You" to rhyme three times in row, that already fucks your verse up there alone.. Not much of a punch base in any of your lines in that verse. Very basic and simplisitic rhyme scheem.. TBH throw out that verse, forget about, and read some battles on this site and see hows it's done. Best advice I can give atm... SOUL: Opener kinda mehh. Not too strong iMO.. Walking into a cage n wrestlin an ape line was cool, could have been a lil more creative with the setup and made something connect more with the finishing punch but goodish.. Dynamite line was ight.. nothing too strong though just a normal punch.. Same with the closer. Overall this verse just lacked the creativity but you did come consistant and throw punches every bar.. Votes in. Voted: AsianPersausion / ~SHINIGAMI~ Posted on: 2012-06-19 18:16:07
Apollyon	FULL BREAKDOWN... ASIANPERSAUSION : Not to good of an opener and it was also hard to follow due to your multies not being capped but what i got was not to good... You kept rhyming off of you which is just plain and not really creative at all... Your next lines were gay and flat out weak... Your lacking multies, good concepts, complexity, set-ups and strong execution... I dont really wanna finish explaining the rest cuz i just told you what your verse lacks..... ~EOSSOUL~ : The concept of your opener wasn't to good which led to a kinda weak punch... Your wording was ok but your set-up could have been more complex... The wrestling an ape line could have been a lot stronger if you worded it differently and showed more complexity but other then that it was decent... The dynamite line was cool but could have been stronger if you had a more complex set-up and more multies but other then that the concept was still good... Your closer was a bit funny but could have been more complex... Try making us think more when it comes to your set-ups and punches but make sure they have 100% relevance to each other... Overall one got this easily... Votes based off of consistency... Voted: AsianPersausion / ~SHINIGAMI~ Posted on: 2012-06-19 19:36:17
Rhifle	NO EXPO NEEDED. OBVIOUS WIN HERE. NO HATE. FV IS IN! Voted: AsianPersausion / ~SHINIGAMI~ Posted on: 2012-06-20 23:36:03
-Slander- <Agent>	one came correct with every aspect of battle. the other was sloppy and hard to follow... fairs in. Voted: AsianPersausion / ~SHINIGAMI~ Posted on: 2012-06-21 23:48:43
UrBaN iNdIaN <SPITTAZ> Basic Member	FV Voted: AsianPersausion / ~SHINIGAMI~ Posted on: 2012-06-22 13:18:15


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