SAY I DONT ‘DAMAGE WIT LINES‘!? WHAT’S DIS REPPER RATIN!? (REPERATION) HE’S A FEATHERWEIGHT, SHH.. I‘LL LET DAT SLIP.. BUT ANY EXTRA PHRASES!?.. DAS WEN ‘HANDS RAISIN & TICK! (sound effect) **& END** TALK/TOCK’ CALL IT SECONDS WASTED!!!!! Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-06-18 14:40:19

alright #437 all time stepping up to the plate... question though, some of your words like "repper ratin" then you put (reparation) and D'red (dread).... I get that those words sound like what you put, but what is their significance in what you are talking about?.... but the my ax-hit-then (accident) was nice and made sense. It seems like everybody writes a little bit more choppy so you can get more rhymes in, while mine is a little smoother but like it has a lot of filler to get my point across.... but I still feel like it is better for it to be smooth sometimes, cuz I don't wan't my shit to just translate to a battle but actually have some complete sentences which makes it easier to follow.... but either way, solid response "loss/laws like legislation" was sick Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-06-18 16:06:47

Aggressiveness N' Delivery Of Punches Took This Decision, I Get Where Prodigy Is Getting At But...I Feel The Same Sometimes In My Battles...But There's A New Generation Of Battling And As The Style Of Battles Evolve You Gotta Adjust Or Change With It. So Fair Vote Is In. No Hate. Voted: Prodigy MC / Rhifle
Posted on: 2012-06-18 16:21:08

REPARATION MEANS DAMAGES (read the line before) And DREAD is TREPIDATION // 'D RED' READ LIKE A MESSAGE PASTED ..PRETTY MUCH SAYIN IF SOMEONE SENT YOU A MESSAGE WITH THE SUBJECT/TITLE LABELED "D" YOU'D READ IT. I DONT KNOW, WOULD'VE SOUNDED BETTER IF YOUR NAME STARTED WITH A D. AND WHEN YOU FEAR OR DREAD SOMETHING YOU GET 'THE CREEPS' RE-READ THE WHOLE LINE AND IT SHOULD MAKE MORE SENSE NOW. THANKS DOE & GOOD BATTLE FAM. Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-06-18 19:54:29

'IMPACT' IS ALSO RELEVANT TO THE ACCIDENT LINE AND EVERYONE KNOWS WHO EMMITT SMITH IS.. I HOPE THIS MAKES MORE SENSE NOW. DROP FAIRS!!!!! Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-06-18 20:04:25

nice, was to subtle for me at first... but subtle is good in this case. It is always better if it makes you have to think a little Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-06-18 20:35:26

Good battle prodigy killed Voted: Prodigy MC / Rhifle
Posted on: 2012-06-20 23:02:21

good shit, good battle by both. FV n8 Voted: Prodigy MC / Rhifle
Posted on: 2012-06-20 23:28:38

hahah @ Asian, realized he fucked up in his vote and tried to make up for it. U gotta read the battle boi. Voted: Prodigy MC / Rhifle
Posted on: 2012-06-20 23:30:28

Prod: Opening lines kinda lacked punchwise. Too basic ish and the concepts were promising... I laughed at the LB pass line though... Basically the same thing throughout your verse, concept wise was a hit or miss cause you didn't set any of it up, or throw some creativity in it. Use some Meta's and be original. Try to step away from being too basic also. On the good note the verse flowed decent... KWON: Very first line had forced wordplay... The Co Laps line was decent. Accident wordplay was forced. It wasn't working there, that messed your line up.. "more approach" line was okay. Snuffing sum midgets line was a bit off worded IMO.. The "trepipation" line came off cool... "seconds wasted" concept was nice... Closer was mehh.. Overall need to work on your wording with this one, Alot of forced stuff in here and wordplay that wasn't working.. you did have some concepts going for you though. Voted: Prodigy MC / Rhifle
Posted on: 2012-06-21 09:35:08

fv Voted: Prodigy MC / Rhifle
Posted on: 2012-06-21 13:05:01