one lil expo: mickey -knox: main charchter in natural born killers... deuces Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-06-16 15:22:16

good from both Voted: Frankie Knox / Mind Fuck
Posted on: 2012-06-17 18:06:15

FULL BREAKDOWN.... FRANKIE KNOX : Who's this no'Body' Casper WANTING TO BATTLE KNOX? you better start to get some presence through TALKING TO SANTA CLAUSE or your 'life could be short lived' W/O a midget who's GOTTEN SOME CANCER SPOTS'... Nice opener... You had some good concepts along with good set-ups and execution but i think your wording could have been better which would of made these lines hit harder... And also judging by your multies it seems like you have an accent, either way your multies seemed to be audio approved so i dont see why they cant be text aprroved also.... I ain't Gotta have a ghat to start ROBBING HIS STASH AT ALL I know you 'wooden make a move' like some BLOCK OF STRAPPED UP LOGS!/ I could jus swing this poser a visit while he's BOPPING DIANA ROSS and take him for all he's worth same way Pac was SHOT FOR HIS CASH AND WATCH!... I wasn't really feeling these lines... None of it was hard hitting and your concepts weren't to strong to begin with either... Your set-ups were somewhat basic and they weren't executed strongly which led to a basic execution... Your multies were fine and the structure of your verse seemes fine also.... I don't give a SQUAT ABOUT YOU DAWG but start shit i'd get a whole SQUAD SURROUNDING Y'ALL that'll 'break you down for the long run' Like a fatso JOGGING IN MARATHONS!!... Once again there wasn't anything strong about these lines but they also were not weak either just basic... The concept of the marathon line should of been set-up and executed with more complexity... Your multies were cool along with structure...These Battle's that I'm in, are known to get outta hand w/o THING FROM THE ADDAMS/ so if this Loney-geek, wants to front-with-me when the only-heat you BRING IS FROM CANDLES?? you better run-&-flee or SPRINT FROM THE MAGNUM cause My firework will reTIRE FUCK like that FIT JOANNE LATHAM... These lines were pretty strong.. Only thing i would like to have seen more of with these lines would be sticking to the concept a bit longer but your set-ups and execution was still strong and your concepts and multies were good... Your wording could have been a bit better but these lines were still strong without it... I don't THINK YOU LOT DAMAGE, lately what you JOT IN STANZA'S.. I would CALL AS AVERAGE/ even your best verse was ALL BUT-SWAGGER… So I know you couldn't 'slip' a win under me if you DROPPED 'BANANAS'!/ change career cos your NOT A RAPPER your just 'filling the empty space' Like games of PARKING MADNESS!!... Nice closer.. Nice concepts and good flow but i would have liked to see more complex and better worded lines but all around these lines were pretty good... Nice concepts and set-ups and execution were good but would have been better if they were more complex and better worded... Overall good verse............. MIND FUCK : you still in that beat crew? got 'newish hanging round looking shabby' like PRODUCTS AT GOOD-WILL, heard frankie don't hustle.. sad cuz KILOS in the corner.. What a waste! w/ some 'cook up' you'd have potential to be -HARD.. IF YOU COULD STILL & what do we got left, one NARC THAT YOU SHOULD KILL yaaaa mean 'get oh's- shot' something like BAR'S IN THE HOOD, CHILL... This was a good opener but it dragged... Your set-ups and execution was decent and i liked how you attacked his crew also.. Concepts were decent, multies were cool, but your structure could be a bit better... These lines were decent I'd sat a little above average... In BATTLE'S YOUR ILLER?? Frank, your riight on when ya say i can't 'fill ya shoes' because 'HALF OF YOUR'S FILLER' & I'm an ACTUAL SPITTER! Matter fact when i pull that glock from my waist i should make 'Knox feel at place' when 3 shots let em know ima -NATURAL BORN KILLER... These lines were good.... From your wording to your set-ups to your execution everything was on point... Nice concepts but once again that natural born killer line could do without a couple words cuz it seemed to take forever to get to the point but other then that these were some solid lines...For Christ sakes Frankie people 'sleep on your ink' like their DREAMING OF TATTO'S, after a 'couple days- my gorillas show you stripes and lay you down w/ the lions' likea WEEKEND AT THE ZOO! gorillas... SPEAKING OF YOUR BOO, nasty bitch i had her 'Guts all Sticky' like when im rolling up then CHIEFING UP THIS GOO.... Decent bars.. Some comical shit in there also.. Your execution to the guts all sticky line didn't hit that hard imo maybe due to wording but it wasn't a strong punch for me.. Your concepts were good though and also that tattoo line was set-ups nicely and executed strongly... The gorilla line was funny.. All around good bars... don't gotta refer a line or two back to know im BEASTING ON THIS DUDE in his dreams he thinks im 'shoving that pump in his face' and he wake up realizing he just BREATHING THROUGH THEM TUBES!!! Even when he look up to the sky, he shook... Bringing a new meaning to 'SEE ME -OUT THE BLUE'!!!.... Pretty strong closer here... Everything seemed to be on point... Your set-ups were executed strongly and also you had some nice concepts... That final line was nice as fuck... Your wording could have been better in some spots but all aorund strong closer... I'll give these verse one more read then drop a fair... Votes based off of consistency... mid/high Voted: Frankie Knox / Mind Fuck
Posted on: 2012-06-19 12:57:04

gota give it to mind fuck but still gb Voted: Frankie Knox / Mind Fuck
Posted on: 2012-06-20 18:46:02

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Posted on: 2012-06-21 04:09:59

frankie send me something .. i feel like bodying some1 D.P.S............!! Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-06-21 05:22:35

fv Voted: Frankie Knox / Mind Fuck
Posted on: 2012-06-21 10:13:01

Close Battle...But The Decision Breaker Was Based On Flow N Delivery Of Punches N' Concepts. Both Did Good But I felt As Tho One Was More Consistent N Clean With It. HONEST VOTE, GOOD SHIT HOMIES. Voted: Frankie Knox / Mind Fuck
Posted on: 2012-06-21 11:19:08

4-4 deleted. Wished i'd of seen this sooner. Dope spar gents. Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-06-21 11:52:12