Dope battle! Leaning to one who I felt was a bit fresher and had harder punches. Voted: Top Notch / RhetoriK
Posted on: 2012-06-01 17:18:35

...Both Came Amazing With Fresh Concepts And Punches. a Little Wordplay Was Contributed But i Was Expecting to See More. One Verse Just Tried to Be Too Indepth and Lost Me With Some Of His Lines. the Other Kept It plain and Flame. *Round Of Applause* ..this will Still Hotlist. Fairs are Dropped so VOTE BACC FELLAS! Voted: Top Notch / RhetoriK
Posted on: 2012-06-01 17:20:10

both dropped mad fire. fresh concepts, on point multies. hard to even vote really. read bothe verse 3 times to pick a winner, and the winner who got this won due to more complexity. very close, won by a midget's pupic hair, seriously. i'd like to see a rematch best battle i seen since i been here. props to BOTH. VERY CLOSE. Voted: Top Notch / RhetoriK
Posted on: 2012-06-01 17:45:25

Dps! Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-06-01 17:52:11

DP mutha'fin S !!!....I shall be back active this week guys . DOPE A$$ battle ! Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-06-01 18:43:57

DPSet. Understand and absorb the things we produce. Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-06-02 00:01:50

KILLA SHIT LIKE ALWAYS! FAIRS IN, VOTE BACK YALL! Voted: Top Notch / RhetoriK
Posted on: 2012-06-02 00:58:07

Someone SuckaFree tho. Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-06-02 07:45:11

PYRO!!! Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-06-02 10:29:04

Had a quick read, will be back to vote.. Voted: Top Notch / RhetoriK
Posted on: 2012-06-02 13:00:03

no love so far...lol Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-06-02 18:15:15

Ok, had a few reads & came to a winner, freshness was a big factor, still close, the fair is in. Voted: Top Notch / RhetoriK
Posted on: 2012-06-02 18:50:05

u was ass in tha "PAST" OF THA BEEF PAGES..."got better" n' started CRACKIN PRESTIGE PLACEMENT, now hes jus BACK to tha "PAST" OF JUS BEIN BASIC guees its was jus "Rhe,-Mission"(remis sion) to "fall BACK TA YA WEAK STAGES"! Opener Was Piff To Be Honest, Never Seen This Concept Utilised In Any Of Rhet Battles. Nice Opener 9/10 now err'bodys "lost faith in you" like "broken PROMISES" or peoples "PROBLEMS WITH GOD N' SHIT"! on some HONEST ISH? you aint "up for this test" like horrible "COLLEGE KIDS"! ya facin some BROLIC SPITS while yo lines "feelin dead"(fill in dead")like its fuckin "EMBALMIN SCRIPTS"! Another Solid Bar. The Buildup Was Perfected. Made The Punch Hit Way Harder. I Love The Way You Don't Pack Your Bars With To Many Concepts. Your Style Is Simple But Complex If You Get Me. 8/10 mad? cuz im LAYIN THA PIPE on who he CLAIMIN HIS WIFE...said you aint SLAYIN IT RIGHT...so NOW INSTEAD..its me n' her witta couple "ROUNDS" IN BED till her "fix is in"..n' she "TAKIN THA DIVE" STRAIGHT TA MUH THIGHS"! i take all ya girls, some SLIGHT CHARM, DEN STRAIGHT BANG...cuz w/ you? jus "ALL A BOARD(all are bored) after they CLIMBED ON THIS "FREIGHT TRAIN"! Mmmmm Not A fan Of Punches With You Talk About The Dues Bitch. I Feel They Don't Hit Hard At All. Your Battling Rhet Not His Broad. Naw Mean? Just my Opinion. Don't Get Me Wrong The Punch Was Nice, Multis Were On Point And Its Flow Nicely. Just Doesn't Have The 'HOLY FUCKIN SHIT' Factor To Me 7/10 homie YA NOT AS BOMB AS ME...beatin me is a no "Chance in Hell" like "DEMONIC LOTTERYS"! ya punches couldnt "out land me" even wit JUS "LOTS OF PROPERTIES"! usin all ya big words? nigga i aint LOSIN TA URKEL! an DPS? dont try n' bring them in "between tha clips" when im BUCKIN THA ROUNDS like a "STUPID COMMERCIAL" cuz if you keep tryin to "FUCK A ROUND"?theyll get it too...thats jus "SCREWIN YA CIRCLE"! The Mini Punches In Your Buildup Added To The Power/Impact Again In This Bar. The Promble Is This Is Not A Very Strong Closer Not Very Personal In My Opinion. Likewise With The Bar Above. Too Generic. 8/10 Overall Your Verse Is Pretty Decent. Your Style Has Swag Wrote All Over It. Your Punches Are Hella Creative & Simple But Complex At The Same Time If You Understand Me. However, I Feel When Battling Someone Like Rhet You Should Add A Few Personals. But Thats My Opinion OVERALL- Low/High 8 Voted: Top Notch / RhetoriK
Posted on: 2012-06-02 19:50:31

u was ass in tha "PAST" OF THA BEEF PAGES..."got better" n' started CRACKIN PRESTIGE PLACEMENT, now hes jus BACK to tha "PAST" OF JUS BEIN BASIC guees its was jus "Rhe,-Mission"(remis sion) to "fall BACK TA YA WEAK STAGES"! Opener Was Piff To Be Honest, Never Seen This Concept Utilised In Any Of Rhet Battles. Nice Opener 9/10 now err'bodys "lost faith in you" like "broken PROMISES" or peoples "PROBLEMS WITH GOD N' SHIT"! on some HONEST ISH? you aint "up for this test" like horrible "COLLEGE KIDS"! ya facin some BROLIC SPITS while yo lines "feelin dead"(fill in dead")like its fuckin "EMBALMIN SCRIPTS"! Another Solid Bar. The Buildup Was Perfected. Made The Punch Hit Way Harder. I Love The Way You Don't Pack Your Bars With To Many Concepts. Your Style Is Simple But Complex If You Get Me. 8/10 mad? cuz im LAYIN THA PIPE on who he CLAIMIN HIS WIFE...said you aint SLAYIN IT RIGHT...so NOW INSTEAD..its me n' her witta couple "ROUNDS" IN BED till her "fix is in"..n' she "TAKIN THA DIVE" STRAIGHT TA MUH THIGHS"! i take all ya girls, some SLIGHT CHARM, DEN STRAIGHT BANG...cuz w/ you? jus "ALL A BOARD(all are bored) after they CLIMBED ON THIS "FREIGHT TRAIN"! Mmmmm Not A fan Of Punches With You Talk About The Dues Bitch. I Feel They Don't Hit Hard At All. Your Battling Rhet Not His Broad. Naw Mean? Just my Opinion. Don't Get Me Wrong The Punch Was Nice, Multis Were On Point And Its Flow Nicely. Just Doesn't Have The 'HOLY FUCKIN SHIT' Factor To Me 7/10 homie YA NOT AS BOMB AS ME...beatin me is a no "Chance in Hell" like "DEMONIC LOTTERYS"! ya punches couldnt "out land me" even wit JUS "LOTS OF PROPERTIES"! usin all ya big words? nigga i aint LOSIN TA URKEL! an DPS? dont try n' bring them in "between tha clips" when im BUCKIN THA ROUNDS like a "STUPID COMMERCIAL" cuz if you keep tryin to "FUCK A ROUND"?theyll get it too...thats jus "SCREWIN YA CIRCLE"! The Mini Punches In Your Buildup Added To The Power/Impact Again In This Bar. The Promble Is This Is Not A Very Strong Closer Not Very Personal In My Opinion. Likewise With The Bar Above. Too Generic. 8/10 Overall Your Verse Is Pretty Decent. Your Style Has Swag Wrote All Over It. Your Punches Are Hella Creative & Simple But Complex At The Same Time If You Understand Me. However, I Feel When Battling Someone Like Rhet You Should Add A Few Personals. But Thats My Opinion OVERALL- Low/High 8 Voted: Top Notch / RhetoriK
Posted on: 2012-06-02 19:51:04

My Words and Balls're all that I'm MANAGIN. Your depressive-MANIC BITCH lemme put 'All My Confidence In Her Mouth' like a PhilANTHROPIST I see you dumbed down your style in this bout. I like it. Flow Was pretty nice here, Punch was cracky too. Not that hard hitting but still nice 8/10 while you 'Cried Uncle At The Colt' like Eli MANNIN'S KIDS! You'll Die 'MADDEN' PISSED cause my Rank 'Overall' is Calvin Johnson to these MACLINS PRICK! You Wiz & Kanye to Amber Rose nigga 'You HALF A BITCH!! I cannot pass judgement on the punch because I don't understand it. I don't want to seem stupid by saying this but it is better to look dumb rather then lie. ' Cool ya ass off or get it temper-TANTRUMED IN. These MASSIVE TIMB'S TRACTION GRIP'll have you Rubber-Tree-FRAGMENT -SHIT out the same hole my Foot was firmly PLANTED IN! OMG.. Imma CASSIUS HIM! The 'Sap will Fall Out' when I 'TAP' HIS CHIN! Fuck Politics that DNP sway FRACTIONS WITH. I'll 'Army Press his Faction' till his 'BACKIN' BENDS ..ASK HIM THEN "Was Fightin Me the Idea to GRAPPLE WITH?" -_- Ground and Pound: He couldn't evade a punch if he 'Turned to PASS-A-FIST' or 'Wrap His Head Around A Hairy Situation' like a CANCER STINT!! I'll take the above part as one bar. The whole thing spelled out S W A G. Problem is there was no really hard hitting punchline. Quite a generic bar. Couple a jabs don't make up a haymaker However there is nothing wrong with this bar just nothing wow about it 7/10 This LAST ATTEMPT at MATCHIN WHITS has 'Scrooge, ya Old Man' ..I'm Bobby CRATCHET WITH these ACTIVE KIDS. Last time I checked Me, DeNiro, AlmightyRAP AND CHIZZ ran SLAPABITCH. We 'Four Fathered' the 'Idea of Pimpin' to THAT EXTENT. You'll be Hall of Fame first? Well, THAT DEPENDS on who's really DAD IN THIS? ..A 'Sun is a Star Above All' & either way you leavin with an ASTERISK!! Ooooo dayum this hit hard, The buildup to the punch was fucking crack. You got a dope ability of sort of scripting a story Rhet, Nicest segment to your verse. Overal l Rhet, Your verse was swaggin. But only delivere the 'HOLY FUCKING SHIT' moment once to me I've seen you write ope shit. I'm just wondering if dumbing down ya style was the best thing to do OVERALL- Low/Mid 8 Voted: Top Notch / RhetoriK
Posted on: 2012-06-02 19:51:52

Close in one sense, Depending on how you look at it. But one in my opinion just had the wow factor in this bout. Both dope as fuck doh. Regardless of who wins. Daddy got this for me doh Voted: Top Notch / RhetoriK
Posted on: 2012-06-02 19:53:40

this is honestly the dopest shit i have read since i came to this site. Voted: Top Notch / RhetoriK
Posted on: 2012-06-02 22:34:08

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Posted on: 2012-06-02 23:40:56

Dopee. Felt one a little more though tbh. Good bout homies. Voted: Top Notch / RhetoriK
Posted on: 2012-06-03 00:21:07

gb Voted: Top Notch / RhetoriK
Posted on: 2012-06-03 15:00:39

Close one man Voted: Top Notch / RhetoriK
Posted on: 2012-06-03 15:28:12

nice Voted: Top Notch / RhetoriK
Posted on: 2012-06-03 20:48:04

FULL BREAKDOWN..... D.N.P : u was ass in tha "PAST" OF THA BEEF PAGES..."got better" n' started CRACKIN PRESTIGE PLACEMENT, now hes jus BACK to tha "PAST" OF JUS BEIN BASIC guees its was jus "Rhe,-Mission"(remis sion) to "fall BACK TA YA WEAK STAGES"!.... Pretty decent opener but the lack of creativity made it less as strong as it could have been... The flow of these lines made it seem like you were in attack mode though... I didn't really care for the wordplay it wasn't to strong, your multies were fine, and your execution seemed to be a little above average... Set-ups were a little basic.... now err'bodys "lost faith in you" like "broken PROMISES" or peoples "PROBLEMS WITH GOD N' SHIT"! on some HONEST ISH? you aint "up for this test" like horrible "COLLEGE KIDS"! ya facin some BROLIC SPITS while yo lines "feelin dead"(fill in dead")like its fuckin "EMBALMIN SCRIPTS".... Started slow but ended somewhat strong.. Wordplay was executed fine, Concepts were ok, set-ups were ok, but i really dont think your execution was too strong due to wording... Your creativity in these lines are better then your previous though... And that Embalming scripts line was nice... mad? cuz im LAYIN THA PIPE on who he CLAIMIN HIS WIFE...said you aint SLAYIN IT RIGHT...so NOW INSTEAD..its me n' her witta couple "ROUNDS" IN BED till her "fix is in"..n' she "TAKIN THA DIVE" STRAIGHT TA MUH THIGHS"... Nothing to strong here and theres a little filler in there but for some reason that last line seemed a little funny to me probably cuz I've been smoking but anyways concepts were decent but your set-ups should have been stronger and worded differently... Your multies were nice but your execution fell off from your previous lines in this battle... i take all ya girls, some SLIGHT CHARM, DEN STRAIGHT BANG...cuz w/ you? jus "ALL A BOARD(all are bored) after they CLIMBED ON THIS "FREIGHT TRAIN"! homie YA NOT AS BOMB AS ME...beatin me is a no "Chance in Hell" like "DEMONIC LOTTERYS"! ya punches couldnt "out land me" even wit JUS "LOTS OF PROPERTIES".... You picked it up... These were some pretty solid lines.. The only problem i seen was the all a bored shit its a little played but you executed it somewhat decently... Multies were good and that demonic lottery line was also executed nicely... Concepts were better, execution was stronger then before and your set-ups were nice and nicely executed... Actually your freight train line could have been worded better... usin all ya big words? nigga i aint LOSIN TA URKEL! an DPS? dont try n' bring them in "between tha clips" when im BUCKIN THA ROUNDS like a "STUPID COMMERCIAL" cuz if you keep tryin to "FUCK A ROUND"?theyll get it too...thats jus "SCREWIN YA CIRCLE"... Decent closer but your wording and set-ups were lacking and i didn't think your structure should have been set-up that way at all.. Concepts were ok, multies were good but your execution suffered due to your wording but you had some nice ideas also your structure and set-ups made your execution weaker then it should have been... Overall you had a nice verse just a couple things you gotta take your time on..............RHET ORIK : My Words and Balls're all that I'm MANAGIN. Your depressive-MANIC BITCH lemme put 'All My Confidence In Her Mouth' like a PhilANTHROPIST while you 'Cried Uncle At The Colt' like Eli MANNIN'S KIDS! You'll Die 'MADDEN' PISSED cause my Rank 'Overall' is Calvin Johnson to these MACLINS PRICK! You Wiz & Kanye to Amber Rose nigga 'You HALF A BITCH!!' ... Lol your bars have their own swag to'em.. Flow was pretty nice and your set-ups were also pretty nice along with execution... Multies were fine and concepts were executed strongly... Something seemed to be missing though but I'm not sure what, Maybe they could have been worded better or more creative, I'm not sure but they were some decent lines.... Cool ya ass off or get it temper-TANTRUMED IN. These MASSIVE TIMB'S TRACTION GRIP'll have you Rubber-Tree-FRAGMENT -SHIT out the same hole my Foot was firmly PLANTED IN! OMG.. Imma CASSIUS HIM! The 'Sap will Fall Out' when I 'TAP' HIS CHIN!.... Pretty nice set-ups and fresh concepts here... Multies were a little basic but your execution was on point.. Flow was still good and some creative lines were shown... Nothong too much to say but good shit.... Fuck Politics that DNP sway FRACTIONS WITH. I'll 'Army Press his Faction' till his 'BACKIN' BENDS ..ASK HIM THEN "Was Fightin Me the Idea to GRAPPLE WITH?" -_- Ground and Pound: He couldn't evade a punch if he 'Turned to PASS-A-FIST' or 'Wrap His Head Around A Hairy Situation' like a CANCER STINT!! This LAST ATTEMPT at MATCHIN WHITS has 'Scrooge, ya Old Man' ..I'm Bobby CRATCHET WITH these ACTIVE KIDS.... Excellent lines but I'm not really feeling the scheme shit... Execution and set-ups were good... Multies were decent but could have been better... Wording was ok and your concepts were pretty nice... Creativity was on point... Last time I checked Me, DeNiro, AlmightyRAP AND CHIZZ ran SLAPABITCH. We 'Four Fathered' the 'Idea of Pimpin' to THAT EXTENT. You'll be Hall of Fame first? Well, THAT DEPENDS on who's really DAD IN THIS? ..A 'Sun is a Star Above All' & either way you leavin with an ASTERISK!!... Fresh concepts and your set-ups were nice which led to a strong execution... Still didn't really care for the scheme or multies but your bars were fresh... Overall this was a pretty strong closer.... Votes based off of consistency... Low/High Voted: Top Notch / RhetoriK
Posted on: 2012-06-03 21:25:51

5-6 deleted. Cant vote, too close imo. Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-06-04 05:21:04

Daddy: Opener was nice. Liked the wordplay/nameplay. Feel like all the "Rhe" wordplays are in every battle against him but this approach to it was nice... Next bar flowed well. Felt the "Up for the Test" line was your normal average punch, I liked the "Fill In Dead" line. Original, didn't have that oh factor to it but I def liked it... I wasn't feeling the "Girl" play TBH, it was a smooth read, it just didn't come off as that hard as a punch... Loved the "all are bored" line.. First time I've seen a line like that.. Good ish... Rest of the verse kinda fell off for me though TBH. The closer didn't come off as hard with the attempt IMO and the "chance in hell", "out land me" seemed like those average punch build ups like the "college kids" line was... Rhe: Opener wordplay and concept was nice. Felt the impact factor didn't come for me and I read a few times.. Def the concept was nice though, I liked the following "half a bitch" line though.. Good ish... I liked the "plant" concept and connections but I just didn't feel like there was a big "Oh Factor" in the punch line there.. The "cancer Stint" line was crack though.. The Build Up concept there was nice... Closer was crack.. The "Slap a bitch/Pimp" play was nice along with the closer to follow.. Tought vote here. Both cats shined in some area's and both had there ups and downs... a Spar between two of the best active texters right now.. Oldie and New lol.. Either way good job to ya both. I enjoyed some things about both verses. My vote goes too...... Voted: Top Notch / RhetoriK
Posted on: 2012-06-04 08:43:05

damn this was crack. Voted: Top Notch / RhetoriK
Posted on: 2012-06-04 10:47:54

Real tight battle Voted: Top Notch / RhetoriK
Posted on: 2012-06-04 12:57:33

jesus the shit hit th fan here fr no hate just i thought one had the shit hotter, it was close as shit though Voted: Top Notch / RhetoriK
Posted on: 2012-06-04 15:37:55

Fairs dropped. Straight fire Voted: Top Notch / RhetoriK
Posted on: 2012-06-04 16:32:58