Set Scheme Battle - BETTY WHITES CAREER Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-05-21 15:02:03

BOTH WERE FIRE, LIKE HOW BOTH CAME WIT SAME RHYME SCHEME ONE APPEALED TO ME MORE, FV IS IN, NO H8, VB Voted: Wizdumb / AfterThought
Posted on: 2012-05-21 15:12:30

Typo: in a "Dark Night". Just add the "i" to "n" lol. Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-05-21 15:14:05

Had To Read Twice, Punches N' Flow Was What Edged My Decision...Gud Shyt! Voted: Wizdumb / AfterThought
Posted on: 2012-05-21 15:16:21

Expo: Long arms referring to clock arms, minutes, seconds, etc. Claaaassick! Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-05-21 15:17:33

It's ClassicK! Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-05-21 15:28:00

This is nice, props to both, ima re-read and vote when I'm sober Voted: Wizdumb / AfterThought
Posted on: 2012-05-21 15:47:29

U sendin me that 8 I wasted 9 credits on cuz u told me to fix it or di I post it as a cypher wiz Voted: Wizdumb / AfterThought
Posted on: 2012-05-21 16:21:11

DPS. Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-05-21 18:33:38

pm me for expossss Voted: Wizdumb / AfterThought
Posted on: 2012-05-21 19:27:59

DPSet!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!! Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-05-21 19:54:11

Not the best Scheme Choice, But With That being Said Both Did Pretty Good.. both had a few spots that were a little off on the rhyme scheme. i felt one handled the scheme a little better though. better readability along with nice concepts. good shit fellas Voted: Wizdumb / AfterThought
Posted on: 2012-05-21 20:25:50

Gb Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-05-21 22:42:20

lol @ some of these rates.. Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-05-22 05:00:57

Swaying comments and retarded votes deleted, I'll be back to drop a fair soon. Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-05-22 09:41:17

sick fuckin' battle no h8 Voted: Wizdumb / AfterThought
Posted on: 2012-05-22 10:21:16

The schem could've been better, but both did well with it. Good punches from both, but the winner got chosen due to creativity. Voted: Wizdumb / AfterThought
Posted on: 2012-05-22 10:22:35

they both went hard but wizdumb took this battle....rt Voted: Wizdumb / AfterThought
Posted on: 2012-05-22 11:51:15

This was a decent spar.. I think both versus were really good but i think one just edged this one out def need to see a round 2!!!! Voted: Wizdumb / AfterThought
Posted on: 2012-05-22 13:22:33

Shit was crazy. both came hard, but one had me more on the edge, wantin to read his next line..... Voted: Wizdumb / AfterThought
Posted on: 2012-05-22 13:45:24

ff Voted: Wizdumb / AfterThought
Posted on: 2012-05-22 15:46:10

close battle fair vote had to read twice Voted: Wizdumb / AfterThought
Posted on: 2012-05-22 18:19:09

FULL BREAKDOWN... WIZDUMB : when i spit this 'rat'll shake in fear' like PLENTY VIPERS NEAR cuz when im ENDING BITERS HERE ill leave'em 'slumpin' by the counter' like spaGHETTI NIGHTS PREMIER at the DELI BY THE PIER!!! nd if i 'raised the stakes' and asked whos a READY STRIKER HERE...?! this faggot fuck couldnt 'make the cut' with a maCHETTE KNIFE N SPEAR nd some HEAVY FIGHTIN' GEAR..... Wording could have been better but I liked the concepts here... Structure was alright and multies were good... Punches weren't that strong though but set-ups were decent just poorly executed.... so ill 'crack his smile wider' then a FRIENDLY DYKE W/ CHEER... cuz when the REMY SNIPERS NEAR, i'll have'em 'crashin with a buck' as if his CHEVY SWIPED A DEER n left this geek in more pieces then conFETTI SLICED W/ SHEARS!!! nd his lines been 'under-mine' so when this SWEATY TIKE APPEARS ill have'em 'showin up with more scars' then FREDDYS WIFE N PEERS in a tussle after guzzlin more then TWENTY PINTS OF BEER... Honestly alot of this came off as filler... A couple lines were good but the others just semmed to be going with the flow... Some set-ups were weak and poorly executed others were nice but not that strong... Multies were the only thing you were consistent of... and its clear as sun theres only one DEADLY WRITER HERE... so ill 'scratch'em off the surface' like im GETTING HIVES IN FEAR then let the SEMI FIRE N' CLEAR'em til my 'hands raised at the finish' like a PREPPY NICE CASHIER!!!!! cuz ill 'beast'em with a beating' then just YETI STRIKE HIS EARS to have his 'arms barred n broken' like i GET ADVICE FROM MIR!! and when i STEADY STIKE THE QUEER until this PETTY SIGHTS IN TEARS ill have'em 'strugglin' just to stay alive' like BETTY WHITES CAREER... Heres where you picked it up... Nothing to special but these lines were definitely better then your previous ones... Multies were of course good set-ups and execution was good and your closer was ok but you lacked creativity in alot of your lines and it seemed like you were just rhyming.... AFTERTHOUGHT : n a "Dark Night" catch you, holdin a WESSON TIGHT & NEAR better stick with that "Rhe-Verse" BET HE WRITES THIS QUEER's coz once its "Red And We Go Back" Everyone wonder how you let my TEXTIN "LIGHT YA REAR"!!! (Reverse, Read)/ this wanna-be first always "Thrown Around" only thing they LET EM FIGHT IS..BEER so them "Long Arms Swingin" will say this "SECOND's TIME IS NEAR".... Pretty good here... Concepts were good, wordplay was fine, set-ups and execution were done nicely and your structure was good... Punches seemed to hit strongly... And your wording was nice... married to the game? then this battle's divorce & LEMME WRITE, THIS YEAR? you wouldn't "Rap For Ya Life, Partner" in a WEDDING CYPHER HERE!!!/ homie if the guns come out, LETTIN RIFLES? CHEERS..people be "Lookin Down At This Body" like "ghosts MISSIN LIFE" w/ TEARS!!!/ grab some homies, come over, GET A KNIFE TO SMEAR & still lose, coz yall couldn't "Tag On My Neck" IF A PRICE WAS CLEAR..... Some of your multies were iffy but i could understand if this was audio... Ups and downs in these lines but some concepts were nice and some set-ups were nicely executed along with punches others weren't too good but not bad... Creativity was also shown and structure was fine.... you'll get "Shot In The Box" WHEN I STRIKE, SINCERE so dont say ya hustle, coz my stacks of BREAD AS TIGHT AS PEERS that whenever "I Deal, Make You Look Bad" like ya PIC IN LICENSE's WEIRD!!! (ID'll)/ end up DEAD toNIGHT FROM FEAR since you wack as fuck & "NEVER MIGHT PREMIERE" coz ya position couldnt be "High & Handle The Boards" if you "FLY A KITE & STEER"... Not to strong of a closer but its decent... Set-ups were ok but could have been executed better in some spots but your punchers were a little above average... Concepts were ok and your wordplay was also ok... Multies were ok even though some people might go by how they look rather then rapping them to see how they sound... Anyways this battle was pretty good but i wasn't feeling the scheme shit at all... I went with the more creative verse... High rates due to executing the scheme nicely... Voted: Wizdumb / AfterThought
Posted on: 2012-05-22 19:19:53

good spar..winner came wit a bit more consistent punches..imo. both did their thing..gb Voted: Wizdumb / AfterThought
Posted on: 2012-05-23 12:27:35

I thought both did a good job of an awkward rhyme scheme to be honest. One had a lot more of the rhyme scheme going on than the other but I thought that it came at a sacrifice to content and punches. One had better structured punches which to me hit a little harder. Good read all round Voted: Wizdumb / AfterThought
Posted on: 2012-05-23 13:19:09

fv Voted: Wizdumb / AfterThought
Posted on: 2012-05-23 14:47:22

Wiz edged away Voted: Wizdumb / AfterThought
Posted on: 2012-05-23 17:50:40

ok Voted: Wizdumb / AfterThought
Posted on: 2012-05-24 09:11:19

Promethian comment deleted. Vote stands. Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-05-24 13:40:36