ya killed the knagaroo larva,,lmao.,. Voted: ShawryKunts / MOE803
Posted on: 2012-02-22 10:32:18

Fair is in, I'll do a expo and do my best not to sway. Cuz most will probably not even read shawry cuz he didnt cap syllables. ------Shawry, you got some bars in there, even though rhyming words aren't capped. I hope others don't skim over you cuz of that. Alright so, you got a few good punches going on, and seem to have a good sense of ''battle rapping.'' I felt you were strongest with ur flow, and the suddle punches that are mixed in. My favorite part was that martha stewart reference, lol that was random as hell dog, cracked me up. I did like the sparta line also, and the antonio tarver, was on some bodybag off the start shit. Never seen you on lb before, but you made a good first impression to me. Solid Verse for what like your 10th,11th battle? I've seen people with 100 battles on there belt, that couldnt hang wit dat verse. I would like to see you bring rhymes like this again. only advice I have is, get more in depth with those metaphors and punches, looks like you know what your doing in that area, SO JUST DIVE IN AN WRECK THAT SHIT YO. stay gunning for your opponent, and don't back down for 1 second. Word. ------MOE, I'm loving this verse here, you got a bit of everything going on in, but its tied together nicely with that ''moe'' flavoring. Favorite parts were, that crazy swagger ''that take notes wit quotes from a mac's crowd'', the WWE line was beast, somehow you rhymed style with those other words and it worked. but the best part, was that ludacris, chingy line, I was like OHHHHHHHH SHIT. Legit fkn spits there. I cant criticize much, you on point with this verse the only thing i see wrong is ''cranola,'' its actually spelled ''Granola'' LOL :) but fuck, I know Ive heard alot of people call it cranola before. Your point comes across nicely in the bar, it doesnt take away from the line in my opinion. Keep developing your style, and keep that swagger at 10 thousand! Props to both, To me there was a knockout blow in this battle, and that is a big percent of my vote on this, also consistency, and presence, influenced my opinion very much. No hate to either writer/emcee. You both did ya damn thing, you guys stay grinding.... Good luck to both. Voted: ShawryKunts / MOE803
Posted on: 2012-02-22 11:15:13

cheers i do a fair bit of live battling in Real Talk and Grind Time in Aus just come on here now and type freestyle for practice Peace Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-02-22 11:30:34

NICE BATTLE ONE over took the other! Punches n multis where on point, FV Voted: ShawryKunts / MOE803
Posted on: 2012-02-22 14:00:49

the saga continues ,36 chambers, reunited, WU TANG ??? i thought that was my best work lol they should make it more rounds ey lol thx for battle man Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-02-22 16:32:49