:Expo: CoRe sOuL Needs No Expo! Comment Only
Posted on: 2012-01-22 11:23:49

One didn't bring enough multis or a smooth rhyme pattern to there work. Flow was choppy and didn't deliver ay impact.. One just went light it seems but did leave the impact to win it. Fair's in. Voted: T_RAWW ~828~ / Q
Posted on: 2012-01-23 11:44:02

no need for breakdown on this one here,.....but one needs to work on punches...multis and not being so basic the other had good ideas and concepts and multis but overrall took it very easily....my YELLOW BUS vote is in Voted: T_RAWW ~828~ / Q
Posted on: 2012-01-23 19:51:25

T- Your bars are VERY basic right now, i think you could improve with a lot of practice and effort, you have very very basic wordplay such as the head spin-barbers pole gag, think that was the main point of your verse, get some complexity, read and learn from other battles and just try be creative and put some thought behind your bars and you'll start to elevate. Core- i know you went light than usual here, Some nice personals and name play, thirsty brits line was nice, at the moment i think your structure could do with a bit of work, rhymes lost me a couple times and a lot of filler, but nice punches. Like i say i know you went soft so ima give you a mid** this time, and T you getting a low ** but keep trying. Fair vote is in. Voted: T_RAWW ~828~ / Q
Posted on: 2012-01-24 13:36:29

i gotta say T you mad fo sendin core a verse like that, props fo havin tha balls too, but stupid all the same. nuff sed. FV always, vote back FAIRLY. Peace..3D - LAS1 - Voted: T_RAWW ~828~ / Q
Posted on: 2012-01-25 09:41:42

balls was spost to be an 8, ma badd Voted: T_RAWW ~828~ / Q
Posted on: 2012-01-25 09:42:10