I thought Proverb was ahead here on punches here, and also multies. Blocc you need to make sure you're actually rhyming all the syllables at the end of each line. I don't see how "head in class/from spaz/last/gassin ass" works as anything more than the final syllable rhyming.

Proverb your verse would have been easier to read if you had CAPITALISED your multi rhymes but I got them nonetheless. I thought your verse flowed well but seemed a little like a freestyle, also try to make sure all of your multis in a scheme fit the scheme entirely (in "not wordy/nine thirty/block dirty" nine just doesn't fit). Overall I thought your verse was solid but could have had more frequent punches and less filler, your opener was probably bar of the battle.

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Posted on: 2011-10-29 18:33:26

Man I fucked that last line up moving too fast lol

Wow kind of simple both actually have a very similar style. My winner had more punches and attacked a bit moreover . But tbh this was almost identical 

 Why's this say started 2011 lmfao

This kid is either Bnas or Zooka 

also ii never voted the site generated a vote when I just commented. Someone delete my vote