Stob Is Legend. Posted on: 2011-10-16 12:29:29

#yellowshirtswag. Comment Only
Posted on: 2011-10-16 11:41:10

LEGEND. Comment Only
Posted on: 2011-10-16 11:45:55

I would.. But I'm on my phone atm. :/ Comment Only
Posted on: 2011-10-16 11:47:16

*Mwahahahahahaha Bwhahahahaha* Comment Only
Posted on: 2011-10-16 11:49:24

Uh oh... Comment Only
Posted on: 2011-10-16 11:59:18

fuck a goon :high: LEGEND. Comment Only
Posted on: 2011-10-16 12:08:34

http://www.letsbeef. com/battle_details.p hp?section=tb&id=415 067.....dude please ..i need a vote...dope shit tho Comment Only
Posted on: 2011-10-16 12:20:55

Alotta typos.. But its a keystyle.. Hope yall Get it. G' Battle BASTID!!! Comment Only
Posted on: 2011-10-16 12:26:21

Damn you grizz lol Comment Only
Posted on: 2011-10-16 12:29:15

Grizzy is Classick :fyou: Comment Only
Posted on: 2011-10-16 12:32:28

Go.On Squad. Comment Only
Posted on: 2011-10-16 12:34:06

CLASSICK AT RHYMIN' ALL DAY!! but naw bigger punches took this for me more consistency an i think one brang a little more energy to the table if you know what im sayin . but fair vote is in .. Voted: SToBBaRT / GRizzEAT
Posted on: 2011-10-16 12:45:11

That's that Goon-Sick shit. :O Comment Only
Posted on: 2011-10-16 12:50:02

damn... Go.On Comment Only
Posted on: 2011-10-16 13:26:35

*Gooooooon Squaaaaaaad* Comment Only
Posted on: 2011-10-16 13:47:04

Nice lil father/son spar.. Overall an entertaining read. It's weird one had better concepts by far, but the wording hindered the readability a bit. The other was more consistent, but oddly enough had the best and worst individual bars of the battle. Fairs In very entertaining match. Gobiln. Voted: SToBBaRT / GRizzEAT
Posted on: 2011-10-16 14:59:50

HMM.....TWO VERY GOOD VERSES WIT SOMEVERY CREATIVE PUNCHLINES ON BOTH SIDES.....ONE MADE ME 'LOL' ALOT MORE AND IT DEFINATELY IS LEANIN ME ONE WAY.....GREAT FUCKIN BATTLE....FAIRS IN.....peace Voted: SToBBaRT / GRizzEAT
Posted on: 2011-10-16 15:45:06

JUS READ STOBBARTS FROM FRANCE hahaha....WTF??? Voted: SToBBaRT / GRizzEAT
Posted on: 2011-10-16 15:46:33

dopest battle ive read so far. Voted: SToBBaRT / GRizzEAT
Posted on: 2011-10-16 16:09:33

Gotta Get Back at This One , Each Had they Strong Points Which Leaves Me Indecisive . Comment Only
Posted on: 2011-10-17 04:08:20

Gooooonnn SQUADDDDDDDD Comment Only
Posted on: 2011-10-17 04:08:25

FVA check out open battles no hate all respect Voted: SToBBaRT / GRizzEAT
Posted on: 2011-10-17 12:34:33

gb Voted: SToBBaRT / GRizzEAT
Posted on: 2011-10-17 14:32:07

maaaannnn this shit is too hard, i'ma re-read real quick. ok, stobb was smoother all the way through... and i said dam. this is pretty nice, grizz's concepts were crazy though. he was smooth as shit from the start got a little shakey but was still throwing some power shit... that urn a living, and zelda line was dam, the mappin success black friday lines was wow... i felt one had a few more bars that topped the other ones... so thats where the votes go. Voted: SToBBaRT / GRizzEAT
Posted on: 2011-10-17 18:50:39

*GS* Comment Only
Posted on: 2011-10-17 22:10:58

fb Voted: SToBBaRT / GRizzEAT
Posted on: 2011-10-18 03:45:05

SToBBaRT; Wasn't really feeling your opener, nice idea but think it could have been executed a little better to make it hit harder. Stomp on your head was a little similar to your opener, idea was there but it lacked a hard hitting punch. Earn line was pretty nice, set-up could have been a little better. Tribute show punch was your most creative jab thus far, good shit. lol @ the Zelda punch. Closer was pretty tight. Took you a while to get going but improved alot as your verse progressed. GRizzEAT; Opener was pretty nice, set-up was on point too. Not really feeling the pay day line, could be a personal prefference but didn't do much damage IMO. Broken tower line was meh, set-up a little nicer and it could have having some impact. Pen/Pin don't work imo. Other than that, was a decent idea but poorly executed. Legend - Map line was pretty nice, seen a similar concept before but it was probably your best punch thus far. lol @ your closer, nice. Pretty hard battle to judge, both had there ups and downs, One started off a little better while the other finished on a stronger note. My bad if my comment seemes somewhat as swaying but you both know its fair...Fairness is dropped...Respect it Voted: SToBBaRT / GRizzEAT
Posted on: 2011-10-18 05:11:26

cool Voted: SToBBaRT / GRizzEAT
Posted on: 2011-10-18 05:25:43

close battle but i picked one. fairs in Voted: SToBBaRT / GRizzEAT
Posted on: 2011-10-18 06:47:18

ima be honest.. thought it was a pretty weak battle overall. i guess im not seeing what everyone else is. i mean people should not be dropping cell / bar /battery type lines in 2011 and have people giving them 9's. that shit was already played out in 2005. anyway lemme go by verse, StoBB- im finding the flow overall to still be choppy. which is a hard thing to master and its also hard to explain. its just then when i read "carried this bastard son" "charity marathon" etc it sounds really forced and unnatural sounding to me. ya diggg? and the concept for that bar was aight i guess. the second line was ok, seen the concept so it didnt have as much of an impact for me. also it seems like you had the concept in mind and worked backwards but didnt really think this all the way through. like why would you ever ask anyone where their mom is? its like you just had to ask him a question that he doesnt remember so you can have the punchline. but the set up in itself is just.. pointless? know what i mean? like i get the concept and its cool but if your set up its kinda.. bad.. it makes the whole line bad, you know?! next line i get your idea but wasnt worded too well. the reason being you cant "urn a living son" like i get what youre saying but the wording is way to off. plus its not considered living till it fertilizes an egg so its scientifically fucked up lol. you can say i overanalyze but if you get your verses flawless than people can never complain bout shit.. try to write flawless lines. also saying shit like "do you know how gay this 'DAWG BE' is poor rhyming. calling someone dawg like that is very awkward. its never really used like that. you just needed to make it rhyme. kill that shit. oughta finish off this 'kid that flows' .. thats another one. 'kid that flows' is just asfjhaskfahsk thats just noise. rhyme better. you have enough words in your vocab that you dont need to resort to rhyming 'kid that flows' it sounds hella amateurish. the zelda line was ok lol. i think people gassin you too hard on this one bro. move a lil green like zelda on the DS thats wayyyyyyyy to much of a stretch. you could really say that about anything. like moving green like blowing on a blade of grass. if you heard that youd prolly say it was retarded... but it isnt really THAT different from what you said. that line was too forced my bro. 'dumb man is hating' (rhyme better.. thats weak) and the closer was blahhh. same idea as the bar / cell / battery. coughing / sickness bars are way to outdated. overall def not that great of a verse imo. gunna give you a 6 cus you had some decent ideas overall. other areas were poor on this one though. Voted: SToBBaRT / GRizzEAT
Posted on: 2011-10-18 13:00:05

grizzy- you've improved alot since i last read something from you. you still have multi issues where you say some irrelevant stuff and dont have much connection between them though. lemme go through it. quotes around 'accounts are legendary' is not necessary, it doesnt have any real connection to an idea. quotes arent decoration. theyre there to indicate similarities between ideas.. in this case they dont. dont put em. nice idea at the start but wording was awful. if you set that up a lil nicer it wouldve been a nice little punch. but as long as you got the idea down you can work on the rest. "hoe tha coward" thats weak as hell. you cant hoe a coward. rhyme better. fuck man lol. the battery line is weakk for a few reasons. #1 the concept is played to death. #2 bars dont get charged by batteries. bars are your phones reception. so the whole idea is void.. then the coke and powder / joke is sour multies were bad fillerr that led up to another played idea of the cell thing.. i dont even wanna get into it just dont do it again tbh. 'wrap up heat' like dressing in scarves made me sick.. you guys gotta stop inserting this stretched lame shit just for the sake of having a punch. take a step back and really examine what you wrote.. its NOT good at all. try to strive for some better ideas dude.. you shouldnt be writing stuff like that anymore.. you been here for like 3 years lol. whip up bustin was the same thing.. this stufff is very weak man. and its just unheard of in the english language to talk that way. people seem to really overlook grammar. if youre talking like an immigrant your shit is always gunna read dumb.i get what you were going with the nap thing but again man.. youre stretching ideas like CRAZY you really gotta stay more realistic. map punch was definately your best. closer was aighttt. again nothing really that great overall from either in this one.. not a battle of haymakers by any means. Voted: SToBBaRT / GRizzEAT
Posted on: 2011-10-18 13:12:32

overall i went 6's to both, not the best battle ive seen from one side especially. but theres my honest vote. Voted: SToBBaRT / GRizzEAT
Posted on: 2011-10-18 13:16:31

Deleted Sways. Voted: SToBBaRT / GRizzEAT
Posted on: 2011-10-18 18:46:53

Im going to have to agree with Jason on this one. Nothing exciting here. Line I enjoyed most was Grizz's opener. I'll have to break this one down in cats to explain my decision. Flow - Grizz. Multis - Grizz. Punches - Sto. Wordplay - Sto. Nameplay - Grizz. Complexity - Sto. Its a tie in cats but complexity is like taking that extra step in your verse and i felt Sto showed that. So my vote is in, whether you like it or not. Voted: SToBBaRT / GRizzEAT
Posted on: 2011-10-18 19:42:59

IMHO, Jason seen my expo and said fuggit...cunt lol Voted: SToBBaRT / GRizzEAT
Posted on: 2011-10-18 23:20:43

too much for me to read, but good shit... Voted: SToBBaRT / GRizzEAT
Posted on: 2011-10-18 23:21:14

Stobbart: your opener was a little weak compared to what I've seen you do your flow was alright multies were lackin a little bit your punches were good not great but good your structure was not so great I could not follow the points you were tryin to get across without readin them several times over should not have to do that in my opinion GrizzEat: you came pretty hard not as hard as you have before but eh not every battle is going to be better than the next your multies were ok and I believe if I'm readin correctly the most syll's you had was 5? I have seen you do better than that, flow was alright some of your structure was a little off beat as well what took it for you for my vote is your harshness compared to stobbart and your consistency in a story I can appreciate a good punch but I cannot stand random punches good battle but not the best from either respect the vote and expo Voted: SToBBaRT / GRizzEAT
Posted on: 2011-10-19 01:14:45

gb Voted: SToBBaRT / GRizzEAT
Posted on: 2011-10-19 10:18:44

Dope battle, both had nice openers but one came harder there. Concepts were better, punches were more original from one, other was dope too flow was a lil choppy though but overall both were nice. Mid-High 9 Voted: SToBBaRT / GRizzEAT
Posted on: 2011-10-19 11:56:57

good battle fair vote pretty even, both came hard wit good punches n flow but grizzeat took it... return a fair vote Voted: SToBBaRT / GRizzEAT
Posted on: 2011-10-19 12:10:18

Damn.. I got dum voters on both sides of tha map. Sigh.. A nigga cant win fo losin. Comment Only
Posted on: 2011-10-19 12:15:55