good battle....fv is in but one just had better word play, structure, and metaphores. no hate both drops were nice Voted: Davidlowk / Beyond Lunatic
Posted on: 2011-10-13 03:03:17

both wre aiit, no hate, bur one had an edge, check out ma battles and vote pls Voted: Davidlowk / Beyond Lunatic
Posted on: 2011-10-13 05:50:36

gb, beyond lunatic was way tooo crazy, fv dropped, return it! Voted: Davidlowk / Beyond Lunatic
Posted on: 2011-10-13 07:56:00

fair dropped, return it Voted: Davidlowk / Beyond Lunatic
Posted on: 2011-10-14 13:43:32

FV, both had good flow one had more originality I felt though, no disrespect though. Good battle. Voted: Davidlowk / Beyond Lunatic
Posted on: 2011-10-14 17:59:51

Broken multies, underwhelming punches and a lack of creativity here, but as I understand it it's a snipe anyway. Davidlowk: you're new here, so a lot to learn to get up to speed with the battle criteria in the text arena. That's ok, absolutely no hate for what you do and how you've done it, but try reading some more battles by some of the older cats on here to see what voters look for in structures, punchlines, metaphors etc. Beyond Lunatic: a light verse with no realy punches or creativity, but again I concede it was a snipe so I won't judge it too hard. Fair one's in. Voted: Davidlowk / Beyond Lunatic
Posted on: 2011-10-15 05:50:17

CB good shit both of yall Voted: Davidlowk / Beyond Lunatic
Posted on: 2011-10-15 07:25:23