man the structures all fucked up. i had to change alot of it around to make it fit Comment Only
Posted on: 2011-09-21 04:26:17

yeah me to Comment Only
Posted on: 2011-09-21 05:24:51

Lions: dis was def not your best verse bro... good meta's, some ok punches, concepts where pretty good to, multi's where on point. overall this shoulda been a way better verse from you .................... .................... ................ Kr azy: your first line was ehh and that second one you lost it...you picked back up but your structure is whack....your metas where ok, multis where ehh, concepts where ok, multis where all over the place, punches where pretty direct but not much thot put into them...since this was an open from lions that personal is irrelevant to me.....over all this was a real basic verse and you need to cap your ryhmes and come wit a structure........... .FV IS IN Voted: LIONs~TIGERs~BEARs / KRAZY-V
Posted on: 2011-09-21 05:37:23

no hate on this just one had a better verse.....G'LUCK to you both Voted: LIONs~TIGERs~BEARs / KRAZY-V
Posted on: 2011-09-21 05:39:42

@STRANGE NAW IT HITS HARD I JUST RAN OUTTA ROOM AND HAD TO RE-STRUCTURE IT SO IT DOESNT LOOK HOW I WANTED IT TO Comment Only
Posted on: 2011-09-21 06:03:54

i had to do the same...i was at a full 16 bars..before i realized i had to eliminate n change shit to fit what i thought i needed to say..no excuses tho..im new to this shit..but lions whats u excuse..lol u b battling all day..i see u pimpin Comment Only
Posted on: 2011-09-21 07:02:41

By the way good shit KRAZY...... I like yur style. Cao yur multis and punches though. In here thats what everybody look for Comment Only
Posted on: 2011-09-21 08:19:11

thanks..im a work on that..its funny how the battles where i got em..nobody says shit like good..the other nigga always better..lol its ku tho im only getting better..but yeah wit u n another cat i battle..its always like more punches..but thanx good lookin out Comment Only
Posted on: 2011-09-21 08:29:01

one takes this with some pretty nice concepts. fv vb Voted: LIONs~TIGERs~BEARs / KRAZY-V
Posted on: 2011-09-23 13:52:49

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Posted on: 2011-09-23 22:09:31