Expo; one ring, lord of the rings. Bluetooth from phones, like kids sending random shit to people all the time kk. Comment Only
Posted on: 2011-05-02 19:07:42

gb Voted: -Dimez- / Cheque1-2
Posted on: 2011-05-02 19:08:59

I gotta say cheque, I like how the words connect. It's tight. How do I get into a crew or pm? Comment Only
Posted on: 2011-05-02 19:15:02

Just keep elevating your flow brother, I noticed you started the other day I didn't wanna try cut in n seem sniping. But you've improved pretty nicely over a few days since starting. Just gotta start thinking of your metaphores, wordplay etc. make sure it string together and actually makes sense. You get more used to it til the point its instinctual. Don't even think about crews etc. atm, trust me one will come along when you've improved a bit, they aren't necessary until you've developed a bit of a basic structure. Think of openers referring to peoples MC name as I did, shit like that will teach you how to flip battles. You're still up n coming so don't stress bout crews etc. Comment Only
Posted on: 2011-05-02 19:18:13

sht went hard as hell Voted: -Dimez- / Cheque1-2
Posted on: 2011-05-02 19:18:55

Yea I have a couple of raps. It takes me time to come up with a good one. I'm trying to improve on metaphors. And yea I was just spittin random shit. Barely came on here yesterday. I gotta say though that ur style is tight. I like it Comment Only
Posted on: 2011-05-02 19:21:32

When it's taking time, thats when you know it just ain't ticklin. Unless you're impressed with yourself its not worth keeping, I did mine pretty quickly before, your mc name just happen to be simple to rhyme with and it all just strung up. Try not to think about rhyming your words so hard you more or less just gotta think of dissing someone and if it rhymes then it rhymes, just punch in a few things you may be able to rhyme at a time try not to get stuck on a rhyme cause it'll do ya head in lol. Variety of concept is always good but staying on one topic can be good aswell, try mixing it up yourself n you'll find your style. Comment Only
Posted on: 2011-05-02 19:25:42

Thx homie. Appreciate the advice Comment Only
Posted on: 2011-05-02 19:28:36

one had better punches and better structure. fairs with expo's always. return it sometime. Voted: -Dimez- / Cheque1-2
Posted on: 2011-05-02 19:44:27

vbb Voted: -Dimez- / Cheque1-2
Posted on: 2011-05-02 19:48:41

fv no h8 Voted: -Dimez- / Cheque1-2
Posted on: 2011-05-05 17:44:59