I deleted that 10-1 against JaeeySmoke. Posted on: 2011-02-09 21:22:08

I dunno, J had a couple nice ideas that werent structured too strongly. Like the "Perfect Health" punch. A decent concept executed very averagely. Illy i found the fow choppy, the big multis both a gift and a curse to you. I dunno i dont think either BEAT there opponent here. But fuck it one was a touch stronger in the punchline dept. Verrrry low 7's. Posted on: 2011-02-11 06:32:37

Not my best work but I spent more time trying to get the shit to go through than I did writing it lol. Good luckk BROugham Comment Only
Posted on: 2011-02-09 02:02:23

Oh, SHART is when you fart and a little bit of wet poop comes out, Elvis died of a heart attack which is the same thing as a pulmonary embolism and glyceryle trinitrate is another name for nitroglycerine which is given to people with heart issues to widen their blood vessels and keep them from dying from heart attacks. Zach Braff is the guy that plays JD on Scrubs. Comment Only
Posted on: 2011-02-09 02:04:50

good battle its a fair vote Voted: JaeeySmoke / illinium
Posted on: 2011-02-09 05:35:26

J-SMOKE - 6 THE TOP OF THE GARBAGE" like "TRASH CAN LIDS"n - funny as fuck ______________ __________________ Illinium - 3 work on punches and multis Comment Only
Posted on: 2011-02-09 12:22:39

hahahah Comment Only
Posted on: 2011-02-09 13:13:34

Jaeey: Felt like your verse was very basic, felt there where certain parts in your verse that seemed foced, not a terrible verse by any means, try to think "outside the box" a little more, keep at it...illinium: Went with the HUGE multies, some nice punches in there even tho 1 or two seemed a little off...Overall i went with creativity on this one...Fairness is dropped...Respect it Voted: JaeeySmoke / illinium
Posted on: 2011-02-09 22:29:40

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Posted on: 2011-02-10 10:22:25

Here it go...As basic as JSmoke's verse was, it was in the form it needs to be in. multies matched and only thing I can say is "take a step up" when you drop the battles. I know that you do it quick and get lots out, but if you really wanna be the best, think like it, don't act like it. Ill-you rusty. I'm new and I could see it. Thought process was good. I like the part where you ask to refer back to lines you previously said. That's a favorite of mine to do. The big medical terms were nice. The only thing that didn't get you the nod, and this is being too technical (I know), is the fact that you had some multies that was forced/broken. It started at Pulmonary Embolism, but continued on. I wouldn't have judged on that, but that shart some part was off. I did like your verse better, despite you not getting the nod. Voted: JaeeySmoke / illinium
Posted on: 2011-02-10 13:48:57

Smoke: Some Decent Punches.. Most basic though.. Others were a bit off hitting.. plus your a biter.. n banned so not much point for an expo of yours... Ill: for the most part the flow n the multi's were good.. there was some choppy section.. thought your verse was pretty creative and had some cool concepts.. the "pulmonary" line n the closer were nice.. overall thought one brought a lil more complexity n harder punches.. votes in Voted: JaeeySmoke / illinium
Posted on: 2011-02-11 19:58:47