Cool, You've Gotten Better Comment Only
Posted on: 2011-01-15 02:39:35

Ive got this Comment Only
Posted on: 2011-01-15 02:44:07

readers please vote on my battle wit grizzeat...fair votes only please...dont vote if u dont read Comment Only
Posted on: 2011-01-15 02:44:57

gb fv no h8 Voted: killer187 / Illest Sayge
Posted on: 2011-01-15 04:58:09

killer had steady flow. punches were consistent. P, opener coulda came harder. punches mirror was the best line. the ending coulda done a little better in setting up, but it cudda be a killer line. Voted: killer187 / Illest Sayge
Posted on: 2011-01-15 14:46:29

Killer, you had a decent flow game goin, I'll be honest though, be careful of using caps the wrong way. Capping irrelevant words can hurt you sometimes, I saw that with your opening rhymescheme. It wasn't bad but others take that real serious. P Illest you have a real smooth multi presence. Your structure is good and your setups are correctly presented, the only thing I'd say is be MUCH more creative when punching. Your puns aren't where they should be compared to your flow, structure, and setups. Get the puns down and you'd be a serious threat. S/O/N/S Voted: killer187 / Illest Sayge
Posted on: 2011-01-15 17:51:47

yeah i agree with j flythe capping wrong words can hurt you here...one didn't have many punches too...other came solid with some punches but some of them were played...some syllable from both were broken...i'm voting for one i felt came better here...no offense..fairs in..respect it.. Voted: killer187 / Illest Sayge
Posted on: 2011-01-17 14:40:50

one was more consistant here, p work on adding better concepts that havent been used into your verse, this gos for both of you, try to sit back, and think of words that have double meanings,, but first come up with a solid flow that sounds like a sentence. Voted: killer187 / Illest Sayge
Posted on: 2011-01-17 16:58:31

No big expo but I feel one had a cleaner and nicer verse by a bit. Voted: killer187 / Illest Sayge
Posted on: 2011-01-17 17:51:16