sorry yo i dunno how to vote, it was just too much i dont know about Voted: WaDe JaYare / Ardasille
Posted on: 2011-01-10 11:33:19

wade had a good flow and his opener was better, good battle though, fv vb Voted: WaDe JaYare / Ardasille
Posted on: 2011-01-10 12:03:09

k i like the magnum p i wordplay too much to not give a win Voted: WaDe JaYare / Ardasille
Posted on: 2011-01-10 13:41:34

one made more sense Voted: WaDe JaYare / Ardasille
Posted on: 2011-01-10 17:52:11

Ok let me be honest... both of you should find formats for the sake of ease of reading. Let's face it, it's a text battle... the text needs to come across as clean as possible. wade: The flow is really good throughout the verse, you need to link concepts'n'disses together to string successful onslaughts of punches together. As far as punchlines, they were pretty weak, I'm thinking you were gunning for more flow this time around, but to win battles you need more punches. Adrasille: Not a bad verse conceptually. in order to put your ideas across clean, you need to reformat too... the flow was shaky in a couple places but i'd be interested to see what your style evolves into if you stay with it. BOTH: Learn what multis are, the format on this site calls for mutli-syllables to be capped. Both of y'all capped for Inflection, but you'll literally lose votes on that. There wasn't one punchline that hit hard for either. Wade, you're too many battles deep to not start hitting with aggressive punches. Adresille, you have the tools just all those concepts rhyme strongly and you're set. All in all I have to go with a more consistent verse, although the punchlines lacked and the formats were all over the place the winner did have descent flow and thats something to build on. Both of y'all should battle veterans in planned battles so you can get your weight up and build. Anyways, there's my feedback, fairs in, respect it! pZz -RhetoriK Voted: WaDe JaYare / Ardasille
Posted on: 2011-01-10 23:37:29

Wade...Keep working man. Try to find punches that stick. Add more variety to your verses man. You started off strong but then slowly fell off. Try to battle heavyweight opponents that you know will kill you so that you have a challenge. So far you havent battled many worthy opponents. You need to elevate. That pretty much sums up everything. Ardasille... your verse was good but your concepts were unoriginal. Most of your punches didnt stick. If i were you i wouldnt be afraid to get merked a few times. As i told wade just keep battling heavyweights that is the only way to elevate. Alot of your lines where overly written. (like the movie Juno haha). The winner won this based on a better punches simply. Even battle.. you just recieved a vote from the fairest. Voted: WaDe JaYare / Ardasille
Posted on: 2011-01-10 23:37:50

Co-sign with RhetoriK...lose the //'s ..xD..I do it to, but cleanly. Gonna change that..anyways...the battle was mediocre. Nothing too too bad from either side, and nothing all too great, either. Both had some good flow, but one had better concepts. That won it for me, the punches were lacking from both sides, and when not lacking, played too shit...fair is in..low to high. Voted: WaDe JaYare / Ardasille
Posted on: 2011-01-10 23:46:16

fair Voted: WaDe JaYare / Ardasille
Posted on: 2011-01-11 01:20:37

decent battle..just let the words spread in the box fair's in Voted: WaDe JaYare / Ardasille
Posted on: 2011-01-11 01:45:01

DaLingo Word up brah...Wade do as DaLingo said...Winner had some creative flow with better metas and better punches than another !! vbf pm fo' moo' xpo z Voted: WaDe JaYare / Ardasille
Posted on: 2011-01-11 02:47:09

gb, both did there thing, respect homies Voted: WaDe JaYare / Ardasille
Posted on: 2011-01-11 03:14:19

Winner just spit fire...period Voted: WaDe JaYare / Ardasille
Posted on: 2011-01-13 23:53:18