ok good battle dudes ; O* opener wasnt to flash multis were there and the concept was a bit weak but alright to start off/ the gas chambers line wasnt that strong of would like to have seen a bit more in it but i like the end of it 'DE 'CENT' TOPIC" dope wordplay but maybe have something in the punch like "fam couldnt catch dollars if it was a 'DE 'CENT' TOPIC!(suggestion)/ i liked the "CHEEK AND NOGGIN" line cause of the slang used "noggin" australian slang for forehead!/ the concept in the "cheese nip products" line was pretty dope i like that/ but ive gotta say for your best line overall, delievery, setup, concept,w wordplay and multis were all in it was your closer! that is wat i wanted to see in the whole verse fam!! PVP* yyour opener was pretty dope the only thing i have to say is it took a bit for the punch to come through but other than that multis were there, wordplay and concepts! all round funny like/the origin is none line was alright nothing to special i think you coulda set it up a bit better, but still a personal punch which is wat like to see i like how you added the co-ordination bit aswell/ the ora 'gina' line was realy weak, it wasnt that hard hitting as the start of your verse/ and after that fame it just broke done, all the lines after that were weak and lacked the basics like multis and some concepts! FV IS IN!! high 8 high 7 Voted: originality / IkEyStYlEoNlY
Posted on: 2010-12-12 18:45:41

check my closers ;) Voted: originality / IkEyStYlEoNlY
Posted on: 2010-12-12 18:46:24

good battle Comment Only
Posted on: 2010-12-12 22:04:29

remobed a 3 - 4 vote and dropped a fair as well Voted: originality / IkEyStYlEoNlY
Posted on: 2010-12-13 12:50:05