sorry it took so long lol Comment Only
Posted on: 2010-11-25 18:46:19

when i said that '69' ranking of the month line, he was just at 69, lol. not at 70 Comment Only
Posted on: 2010-11-25 20:08:45

Fair'n is in. Voted: merkDyou / originality
Posted on: 2010-11-25 21:32:47

Merk: opener was nice, liked the concept, the flow was a bit off... the "goal" unreachable was nicelt set up.. "Origin ate".. nice nameplay.. "bill collector" line was kinda mehh, not strong there.. closer was a real nice concept, the wording was awkard, felt you coulda did a lot with that.. overall a decent solid verse, can't go wrong there... Originality: opener was decent.. the "lie since" line was real nice, liked the set up on that... the rest was kinda basic to me, not really hardhitting but kept the consitancy alive.... one had a couple more punches i liked in there verse... Originality I would say your dq'd because you did flip, but in this case you were the one that was suppose to send anyways, your lucky that got messed up or ya woulda got that dq.. Its no flippin for the tourny!! Good verses tho.. Good luck Voted: merkDyou / originality
Posted on: 2010-11-25 21:45:13

damn, both better than i thought theyd be.. that 69 line was simple, but it was deliverd nice yo, shit was a reall solid punch. drop some of the decorations~~ and youll be straight, work on that wordin abit.. merk.. you had a couple nice joints in there too.. that origin ate line was fresh.. ya swag is there .. one edged.. close shit Voted: merkDyou / originality
Posted on: 2010-11-25 22:25:59

oh and merk.. lose some of them "................ " in the verse.. it creates pauses where they dont need to be... itll make the verse flow better.. just lookin out. nahmean. Voted: merkDyou / originality
Posted on: 2010-11-25 22:27:37

Origin: I feel that yours flowed a tad better...mild punches...pretty decent. Merk: Was more consistent with repetitive hard punches that made his verse more entertaining. Fairs in...No H8. Voted: merkDyou / originality
Posted on: 2010-11-26 01:36:21

Close but one barely edged it. Voted: merkDyou / originality
Posted on: 2010-11-26 10:51:58

Both of you Collected yo MONEY!! but one got a CENT less... just barely... both wer CASH FLOW!! no lie... FV for O i say niggy had it with the opener and COMPLETED the ROBBERY! NO H8 TO EITHER MC's KEEP IT GANG-BANGIN G's!! Voted: merkDyou / originality
Posted on: 2010-11-26 11:52:43

for an expo PM playa... i really read over both dropz n just edged my vote from specific hits... peeziez Voted: merkDyou / originality
Posted on: 2010-11-26 11:54:25

fv Voted: merkDyou / originality
Posted on: 2010-11-26 17:20:39

to close to call.... but O done did it wit the last line Voted: merkDyou / originality
Posted on: 2010-11-26 23:04:08

i aint know there wasnt supposed to be any flipz...i was supposed to send first and i was but i was busy wit work. so if i get dq i understand that Comment Only
Posted on: 2010-11-27 02:02:16

nah like i side in the sense that you were suppose to send i won't dq... but dont do it again in the tourny battles Voted: merkDyou / originality
Posted on: 2010-11-27 03:37:49

like both but only 1 winner Voted: merkDyou / originality
Posted on: 2010-11-27 05:44:27

hard decision Voted: merkDyou / originality
Posted on: 2010-11-27 14:33:21

fv is in noh8 Voted: merkDyou / originality
Posted on: 2010-11-27 20:33:52

dam good punches on both sides but originality had more of an unforcd flow, no h8 fv vbvb Voted: merkDyou / originality
Posted on: 2010-11-27 22:02:46

close ass battle, im gonna go with the nigga the had the intensity. Voted: merkDyou / originality
Posted on: 2010-11-28 00:23:20

kill Comment Only
Posted on: 2010-11-28 02:41:44

Meh... Voted: merkDyou / originality
Posted on: 2010-11-28 06:00:28

both guys went hard, but orignally had better punchlines in my opinion Voted: merkDyou / originality
Posted on: 2010-11-28 07:09:13