nice... imma get at this now... Comment Only
Posted on: 2010-11-22 12:47:28

Pretty obvious. Voted: DonAiRE / GRizzEAT
Posted on: 2010-11-22 15:59:30

Iight, I'ma drop an expo...Ace: Your opener seemed basic as fuck! And wasn't really a punch. Saying someone is a crew hopper isn't insulting them, especially if it's common knowledge. Then saying you got ill wordplay? Bro, "Mr. Rewards/ Mystery Words" SUCKS! Second line had extremely broken multies, and it didn't rhyme with the punch, not at all. And the punch was weak, same with the concept. Third line, the concept was played, but the punch was still funny as hell. Good setup for a good punch. Fourth line, syllable count sucked, AND the multies were broken with a mediocre punch..lol..last line..sucked, 'nuff said....Low 6 Trap: Opener was good, decent punch, good metaphor with a good concept. Good rhyme scheme and multies, and the setup was decent, also. Second line was great. wasn't really a punch but I do see where you were going with it. Good concept, good setup, and very comedic, the metaphor was good. Good complexity. Third line seemed, basic, the concept is obvious, it seemed like not much thought was put into it. Fourth line was decent, good punch, a good concept, but it seemed basic, again, with not much thought in there, again. Last line, wasn't so great, felt like filler.........low 8.......Overall: There is an obvious winner, one was just better in basically every category and just hit harder with punches...fair is in... Voted: DonAiRE / GRizzEAT
Posted on: 2010-11-25 12:14:30

yo Trap.. if you had more lines like da last one u woulda got my vote... good ass battle tho from both.. FV is in.. RETURN DA FAVOR... Voted: DonAiRE / GRizzEAT
Posted on: 2010-11-25 15:51:17

o n da facebook mafiawars... lmao.. dat shit was hard as fuck.... Voted: DonAiRE / GRizzEAT
Posted on: 2010-11-25 15:51:59